Active and Passive Voice Science 3
Active and Passive Voice Science 3
Active and Passive Voice Science 3
Passive voice is used when we want to emphasize the action (the verb)
and the object of a sentence rather than subject. This means that the
subject is either less important than the action itself or that we don’t know
who or what the subject is.
Most writing instructors and editors recommend against using the passive
voice, when possible. The reason for this is that when you use the active
voice, your writing is clearer and less complicated.
1. Active: While Mr. Taylor was driving down Highway 101, a police
officer pulled him over and gave him a speeding ticket.
2. Passive: While Mr. Taylor was driving down Highway 101, he was
pulled over and given a ticket by a police officer.
If it’s a long sentence and you know who the subject is, it’s best to use the
active voice.
The passive is often used to report something or to state a fact.
wedding.
our neighborhood.
by then.
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GRAMMAR
Active voice means that a sentence has a subject that acts upon its
verb. Passive voice means that a subject is a recipient of a verb’s action.
You may have learned that the passive voice is weak and incorrect, but it
isn’t that simple. When used correctly and in moderation, the passive voice
is fine.
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Active voice
When the subject of a sentence performs the verb’s action, we say that the
sentence is in the active voice. Sentences in the active voice have a strong,
direct, and clear tone. Here are some short and straightforward examples
of active voice.
All three sentences have a basic active voice construction: subject, verb,
and object. The subject monkey performs the action described by adore.
The subject the cashier performs the action described by counted. The
subject the dog performs the action described by chased. The subjects are
doing, doing, doing—they take action in their sentences. The active voice
reminds us of the popular Nike slogan, “Just Do It.”
Passive voice
Let’s take a closer look at the first pair of sentences, “Monkeys adore
bananas” and “Bananas are adored by monkeys.” The active sentence
consists of monkeys (subject) + adore (verb) + bananas (object). The
passive sentence consists of bananas (object) + are adored (a form of to
be plus the past participle adored) + by (preposition) + monkeys (subject).
Making the sentence passive flipped the structure and necessitated the
preposition by. In fact, all three of the transformed sentences above
required the addition of by.
Using the active voice conveys a strong, clear tone and the passive voice is
subtler and weaker. Here’s some good advice: don’t use the passive voice
just because you think it sounds a bit fancier than the active voice.
That said, there are times the passive voice is useful and called for. Take
“The squirrel was chased by the dog,” for example. That sentence
construction would be helpful if the squirrel were the focus of your writing
and not the dog.
A good rule of thumb is to try to put the majority of your sentences in the
active voice, unless you truly can’t write your sentence in any other way.
Here’s a tip: Grammarly catches instances of passive voice in your writing so you know
when you need to switch it up.
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An error has occurred with your account, but every attempt was made to remedy it.
That sentence is not incorrect, but it does sound a bit stiff and dishonest. It
sounds less trustworthy than it could—almost evasive. Who wants to do
business with a company that avoids taking full responsibility by slipping
into formal passive voice territory? Face the responsibility head on instead.
Own it.
We made an error with your account, but we have made every attempt to remedy it.
To make that sentence active rather than passive, I identified the
subject: we. It was “our company” that was responsible.
Here’s a tip: What to remember: to change a sentence from passive voice into active voice,
identify the subject.
PASSIVE VOICE
Transjakarta is used as an
alternative means of transportation
to avoid traffic jam.