Course - Book - Writing 1 - 2019
Course - Book - Writing 1 - 2019
Course - Book - Writing 1 - 2019
Famous people
1. Think about two famous people you know.
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2. Now describe each person using the prompts below:
3. Work with your partner. Read your description of each famous person without telling your
partner what the person is famous for. Can they guess who it is? If not, give them a clue!
well-dressed ………………
Practice 1: Read these descriptions. What are the missing words? Write is or has. Then
match the descriptions with the pictures
Person 1: He is in his 20s. He is tall and has a fit body. He has a black skin color with a short
black hair. He wears a plaid shirt, brown pants and white shoes.
Person 2: He is average height and looks quite chubby. He looks around 40 years old. He is
bald and has a a fair skin. He dresses formally with a blue suit and black leather shoes.
Practice 3: Write a summary sentence for the following paragraph about David Beckham.
Share your sentence with other students and decide whether the sentences restate, summarize,
predict, or suggest / advise.
David Beckham
David Beckham, David Beckham, David Beckham. That’s all anyone can talk about
these days–especially the ladies. He is well – known for not only his good looks but also
his athletic ability. His manly face attracts other people. The next important component of
the David Beckham’s looks is his hair which is generally blonde with a sexy tousled look.
David has also been known to shave
Outine:
- Topic sentence: David Beckham, David Beckham, David Beckham. That’s all
anyone can talk about these days–especially the ladies.
- Supporting sentences:
+) Appearance: good looks (manly face, blond hair), trendy fashion style
+) Job: famous soccer player
+) Talent: take dangerous free kicks and pass the ball long distances
+) Personality: Hardworking
- Concluding sentence: he is multi-talented person and has a amazing personality
WRITING ASSIGNMENTS
Choose one of the following topics and write a descriptive paragraph.
you yourself
a relative / member of your family
a movie / music star
a friend
an important person to you
IDIOMS MEANINGS
1. few and far between a. a place where there are lots of things happening, and everyone
is very busy
2. hive of activity b. a place which is right in the centre
3. middle of nowhere c. a place which is rarely found
4. on the map d. a place which is in a remote area, far from towns, villages or
houses
5. smack dab in the middle e. a place which becomes very well known
ACTIVITY 1:
With a partner, list some words to describe these places. Add them to the following list:
a.
b.
PRELIMINARY CONSIDERATIONS
2. Descriptive order
In a place description, writers often use spatial order to organize their ideas. Spatial order is
the arrangement of items in order by space. For example, when describing your favourite
room at home, you could first describe things on the left side of the doorway and then move
clockwise around to the right side. You could also start on the right and move
counterclockwise around to the left. If you jump back and forth, it would be very difficult for
the reader to try to see the room in his or her mind.
ACTIVITY 2: Each of the following sentences could be the topic sentence of a descriptive
paragraph.
Step 1: Discuss with your group some possible details that describe the place.
Step 2: Decide on the best kind of spatial order to use in the description: right to left, left to
right, top to bottom, far to near, outside to inside, etc.
Step 3: Write your details on the lines below in spatial order.
TS 1: After my sister has spent two hours getting ready for a date, her room looks as if it has
been hit by a magnitude 8.5 earthquake.
a. From the doorway, you see nothing but a mountain of clothes all over the floor.
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TS 2: The park near my house is full of activity on a sunny weekend afternoon.
a. ………………………………………………………………………………………………
b. ……………………………………………………………………………………………...
c. ………………………………………………………………………………………………
d. ………………………………………………………………………………………………
ACTIVITY 4: Edit your list by crossing out unrelated ideas or ones you don’t like. Show
your partner what you crossed out, and explain your decisions.
Stage 2: Organize the ideas
Decide what kind of spatial order will work the best for your description: left to right, far
to near, etc.
Stage 3: Write the rough draft
4. The topic sentence
You might begin your paragraph with a topic sentence that tells what place you are going
to write about and give a general impression.
Example: The corner of the library where I study is my favourite place.
ACTIVITY 5: Write the topic sentence of the paragraph on the topic you have chosen.
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ACTIVITY 6: Work with a partner to complete the paragraph below and make it better. First,
make a list of details you could add to the paragraph. This is an imaginary place, so use your
imagination!
A horrible hotel
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The rooms are small. The rooms are dark. The rooms are dirty. There is no air-
conditioning. The rooms are hot in summer. There is no heating. The rooms are
cold in winter. There are big windows. The view is
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That is why I want to warn you never to stay in that hotel.
ACTIVITY 7: Read this paragraph that describes someone’s favorite place. Write the
summary sentence.
My favourite place to relax is a small cafe’ down the street from where I live.
This cafe’ is on a small side street and as soon as you see it, you feel like going
in. There are three windows on either side of the door. And each window has a
small window box with brightly coloured flowers. There is a small wooden door
that opens into the cafe’, and as you go in, you can see a dozen small tables all
around the room. Even though it isn’t a big place, its size makes it very cosy and
comfortable. I always like to sit at the small table in the corner near the front
windows. From here, I can look at the artwork on the walls and at the pretty
green plants hanging from the ceiling.
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Questions Comments
FORMAT
1. Is the format correct?
(the title, indenting, margins, and double
spacing)
ORGANIZATION
2. Does the paragraph use spatial order?
GRAMMAR & MECHANICS
3. Is there a period at the end of each
sentence?
4. Are capital letters used where necessary?
5. Are commas used correctly?
6. Are the tenses used appropriately?
SENTENCE STRUCTURE
7. Does the writing contain both simple and
compound sentences?
8. Are the compound sentences punctuated
correctly?
Stage 5: Write the final draft
WRITING ASSIGNMENT
Write a paragraph in which you describe your class room, living space, ideal house,
hometown, etc.
Plan your paragraph carefully before you begin writing. Then write a rough draft –
revising as you write. When you have finished, share your writing with one or more students
in your class. What do they think? Are there any points that they think are unclear? How can
you better communicate your ideas?
UNIT 7: SUMMARIES
Activity 2: Work in pairs and decide which of the following best expresses the meaning of
each of the five paragraphs in the article:
1 a Unemployment is as serious a problem today as it was in the 1930s.
b Unemployment is once again a serious problem.
2 a Newspapers simplify the problem of unemployment because they do not take all
the relevant factors into account.
b Newspapers deliberately distort the true facts about unemployment in order to
blame governments.
3 a The main reason for unemployment today is that so many women go out to work.
b Comparisons with the past do not take into account the number of women
working today.
4 a Nobody knows how many of the people not registered are students.
b The difference in school-leaving age also makes international comparisons
unreliable.
5 a Nevertheless, a government’s success in dealing with unemployment must be
measured in terms of the number of people who want to work and cannot.
b Nevertheless, it is a government’s duty to find jobs for everyone.
Activity 3:
Which of the following summaries best expresses the meaning of the passage? Give reasons
for your answer. 2: tìm ý chính các đoạn -> key words trong đoạn-> ghép lại
SUMMARY WRITING
Summary writing involves specific skills such as the following:
Selection – This means choosing the key information by making some notes that
provides the whole picture of the text.
Condensation – This means reducing the length of the given information while
preserving the important points. This can be done by omitting unimportant details, or
using single words to replace phrases or clauses.
There are many ways to write a summary. However, the following way may be useful: You
should list/underline all the important facts. Next, you connect all the points in prose form to
make a smooth and natural summary.
Model
SAD
When winter arrives, some people get sad, even suicidal.
Doctors have recently started to study the causes of a medical disorder which they have appropriately named
SAD, or seasonal affective disorder. People who suffer from sad become very depressed during the winter months.
Their depression appears to be the result of a decrease in the amount of sunlight they are exposed to. Doctors
theorize that decreased sunlight affects the production of melatonin, a hormone manufactured in brain and
serotonin, a chemical that helps transmit nerve impulses. Depression may result from the ensuing imbalance of
these two substances in the body. Also, doctors believe that a decrease in the amount of sunlight the body
receives may cause a disturbance in the body’s natural clock which could, in turn, result in symptoms such as
listlessness, oversleeping, weight gain, anxiety, and irritability – all symptoms of depression.
Since absence of light seems to be the cause of this disorder, a daily exposure to light appears to be the cure.
Doctors advise patients to sit in front of a special light box which simulates natural light for a few hours every day.
In conclusion, this revelation may help explain the high suicide rate of the Scandinavian countries, and more
importantly, it may suggest a remedy when the days grow short, turn on the lights.
Summary
During winter months, some people get depressed and even kill themselves. Doctors have recently found that lack
of sunlight is the cause as it affects the production of a hormone called melatonin in the brain, and a chemical
called serotonin that helps transmit nerve impulses. Also, lack of sunlight disturbs the body’s natural clock, which
could cause all symptoms of depression such as irritability, listlessness, anxiety, etc. As a cure for this disease,
doctors advise people to get exposed to as much light as they can and to turn their lights when winter comes.
Many high school students faced with a long vacation in the heat of summer, look for jobs to undertake until the
classroom calls again. If for no other reasons, these jobs are useful to them because after the months spent within
four walls, facing the same blackboard, maps, and faces, they provide the opportunity for a refreshing change of
atmosphere and environment. A job selling Christmas cards behind the counter in a large city store may be just as
effective as a trip to the country in dispelling the tension that many feel at the end of the year. But jobs are not
available merely because they provide a change of scenery; the financial gains they allow are major considerations
to people who, because they are not regularly employed, are unable to call upon any resources except the
charitable grants of parents and the generous donations of rich uncles or benevolent grandparents. While working,
the students will meet people the like of whom they have never encountered before, and they will quickly learn
the truth that no two people are exactly the same. Some, they will find , are pleasant and friendly, tolerant of their
mistakes and ready to assist the novice probing in largely unfamiliar world; others will prove to be surly,
uncooperative, unable to take a joke and impatient with inadequacy. But after months of facing printed pages,
students will find that even these will not lack interest. It may happen that, in spite of all the minor tribulations, a
student will discover in his temporary job, the work which he desires to make his permanent employment. Should
this happen, a brief time filling occupation will have become an unwitting piece of vocational guidance. He who
sweeps the floor in the Christmas rush may well be a branch manager twenty years later.
WRITING ASSIGNMENTS
1. Summarize the following passage in not more than 120 words. List the main points of the
argument and the writer’s proposals, ignoring details, and construct your summary from
the notes you have made.
2. Read the passage below on Rural Tourism, make notes on it to summarise the
advantages and disadvantages.
Johnson (1971) has listed two major advantages of tourism in rural areas. The first is
economic: tourism creates employment. The jobs are mainly in the travel industry, hotels,
guest houses, restaurants and cafes. However, visitors spend their money in a variety of ways
which affect other jobs indirectly. For example, by buying local souvenirs and gifts, tourists
help to support local shops. The second advantage of tourism is the support that the income
provides for local services and amenities. Because large numbers of visitors use the local
buses etc. it makes it possible to keep these buses running for local people.
As well as advantages there are also three main disadvantage of tourism (Walker, 1982).
The first is erosion of the countryside by so many people: paths, grass and other areas of
vegetation and woodland get worn away. In addition, tourist traffic causes congestion and
obstruction and delays local people doing their work. Finally, an influx of tourists causes
pollution problems in many areas. The pollution can take many forms but the main ones are
the exhaust fumes of vehicles which pollute the atmosphere, and the litter that people leave
behind, such as tin cans, plastic and paper, and bottles.
UNIT 8 INFORMAL LETTERS
Dear Pat,
Lots of
love,
WRITING PRACTICE
ACTIVITY 4: Which expressions below are suitable for an informal letter? Match them with
the following kinds of letter.
Types of letter Expressions
1. Giving news a. Thank you for inviting me to…….
2. Inviting b. Please find enclosed a cheque for …….
3. Accepting an invitation c. George and I are having a party on Saturday, and we’d love
4. Thank-you letter you to come.
d. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
e. Just a quick look note to say thank you.
f. Sorry I haven’t written for so long, but I’ve been terribly
busy.
g. I’d love to come. See you then.
h. Could I please have a receipt?
i. Give my regards to……
j. Let us know if you can come……….
k. It was lovely to see you again after so long.
l. You were very kind to send me a brochure of holiday
cottages.
Dear …
Just a note to say thanks very much for …
It was …
I…
I hope …
Anyway, …
Best wishes,
ACTIVITY 6: Choose one of these letters and write it out in full. Use some of the
expressions in activity 4.
Giving news
Write to an English friend. Give news of a recent holiday you had. Say where you went, who
with, and what you did. Give some news about what you are doing at the moment, and how
your family is.
Inviting
Invite a friend to come to stay at your house for a weekend. Suggest some dates. Say what
you'd like to do during the weekend. Suggest how the friend could travel, and offer to meet
him/her.
Accepting an invitation
Reply to the invitation above. Your friend has invited you to come to stay for a weekend.
Accept the invitation, and say thank you. Give some information about how you'll travel, and
when you expect to arrive.
Thank-you letter
The parents of a friend of yours lent you their house in the country for a week. Write to them
to thank them. Say how kind they were, and describe what you did during the week's holiday
WRITING ASSIGNMENTS
1. You are going on holiday to Australia. A friend who you haven’t seen for a long time
lives there. Write and tell him or her that you are coming and that you will get in
touch when you arrive so that perhaps you can meet. (Say when you are coming,
where you will stay and how long for.)
2. Some friends of a friend are coming to live in your area. You are sending them some
leaflets about your town. Briefly tell them what it is like living there and say that you
hope that they will get in touch with you when they arrive.
3. Some friends came to stay with you last week and you have just found a pair of socks
and a left shoe under their bed. You think (but you are not sure) that the things belong
to them. Also, you have lost a jumper and you think that they might have taken it by
mistake. Write and ask them. (Describe the shoe and socks and your jumper.)
FORMAL LETTERS
ACTIVITY 1: How much do you know about writing a formal letter?
Work with your partner to answer the questionnaire.
A Dear John
B Hi Suzy
C My Dear Elaine
D Dear Sir or Madam
A Regards to Jane
B Please give my regards to Jane
C Say hi to Jane
D Give Jane my best wishes
5 Which of the following is NOT a suitable final sentence for a formal letter?
A Yours faithfully
B Yours sincerely
C Best wishes
D Love
Road
(1) …………… Torquay
Devon
TQ6 1RS
(7) ……………
Cary Harmon
Dear Mr …
Dear Mrs … Yours sincerely
Dear Ms …
Dear Hellen
Dear Mohammed Best wishes
Dear Peter
ACTIVITY 3: Write the missing openings and closings in the provided space.
1. Ms W. Foster 4. The Editor
35 Mount Hill Daily News
Woverton London
Dear …………………………. ………………………………
Yours ………………………... ….…………………………..
2. Dear Marie 5. Dear Roger
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3. Ronco Beds Ltd 6. The Manageress
67 Main Road Pancho’s Restaurant
Jacksonville Buxton
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REGISTER
In a formal letter,
Avoid contractions when possible
for example: I am instead of I'm
Use the present simple instead of the present continuous when possible
for example: I look forward to our meeting instead of I am looking forward . . .
Use the conditional
for example: I would like to visit your farm instead of I want to visit your farm
Use less colloquial English
for example: I'm really interested instead of I am most interested
Construct indirect, impersonal sentences
for example: It would be a good idea . . . instead of I think it's a good idea . . .
ACTIVITY 4: Which of the following expressions are formal (F)? Which are informal (I)?
1. a. I'm terribly sorry not to have written sooner but . . .
b. I apologize for the delay in replying to your letter …
2. a. I would be most grateful if you could . . .
b. It would be nice if you could . . .
3. a. Thanks for your last letter…
b. Thank you for your letter of 15 January.
4. a. Would it be possible to telephone me soon?
b. Phone me as soon as possible.
5. a. Would it be alright if I came at 7 p.m.?
b. Would it be convenient if I arrived at 7 p.m.?
6. a. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
b. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
7. a. I would very much appreciate an early reply.
b. Please reply quickly.
8. a. It would be a good idea to . . .
b. May I suggest that we . . .
9. a. Unfortunately, I won't be able to come.
b. I regret that I am unable to attend.
10. a. I will send all the details.
b. I'll let you know all the details.
ACTIVITY 5
Formal letters often contain words or expressions that are not common in everyday speech.
Match the formal words with their informal expressions.
USEFUL LANGUAGE
Sample Sentences: Requests
Could you please send me your most recent brochure?
Could you fax me the results of the market survey?
I would like to order ten copies of the book, Touchy Situations.
I would be very grateful if you could send me this information.
Please return the enclosed envelope with your payment.
Sample Sentences: Response to request
Thank you for your interest/inquiry
Enclosed is the information you requested.
You can learn more about this at . . .
If you have further questions,
If you require assistance, please contact:
Sample Sentences: Goodwill
Thank you for your hospitality.
I enjoyed having lunch with you last week while I was in New York.
Congratulations on your promotion to General Manager.
I was happy to hear that contract negotiations went well.
Sample Sentences: Introduction of Product/Service
I am writing to tell you about . . .
(Our new product) is coming out next month.
This product/service is designed to (help you) . . .
Sample Sentences: Confirmation
I am writing to confirm . . .
I would like to confirm what we discussed last Friday.
I would just like to confirm the main points we discussed . . .
Sample Sentences: Notification
I am writing to let you know that . . .
Please be aware / informed that . . .
I am happy to inform…
Your request for funding has been approved.
WRITING PRACTICE
ACTIVITY 6: Arrange the parts below to make a complete letter.
1. I am interested in Package D (the 20 day trek in Nepal)
2. Yours faithfully
3. We look forwards to your confirmation of our booking as soon as possible.
4. Thank you for your information you sent about Himalayan Expedition Holidays.
5. We would prefer the Sept. 20th departure date, with a second choice of Oct.15th.
6. I would like to make a definite booking for two people.
7. Dear Sir/ Madam,
8. Himalayan Expedition Holidays
88 Queen Street,
Perth
ACTIVITY 7. Rewrite this letter to make it more formal.
Hello Karl
Just a quick note to confirm that I ’m coming to Berlin on May 5 and I’ll stay
there until May 7th . I hope we can meet to discuss our production requirements
for next year. Please let me know when it would suit you.
See you soon
Chris
ACTIVITY 8. Choose one of the situations below and write an appropriate letter.
a. You are about to move house. You write to the bank telling them your new address.
(Use the name and address of your own bank)
b. You write to the local real estate agent outlining a number of repairs that need to be
done to your flat or house. (To Mr. Bartlett and Peterson Real Estate, 25 Stanley Ave,
Brompton)
c. You write a thank-you letter to your local council, thanking them for the fine work
they have done in establishing a part in your suburb. (To Brighton Municipal Council,
Town Hall, Brighton)
WRITING ASSIGNMENT
Now write short letters for each of these. Lay them out correctly. (See the letter in activity 2
for example)
1. Write to the company named Digital World to ask for a new catalogue of cameras.
2. Write to KF Electronics to confirm that you have received your refrigerator as
requested.
3. Write to a customer to advertise a new mobile phone model of your company