Location via proxy:   [ UP ]  
[Report a bug]   [Manage cookies]                
Scribd Logo
Upload

Welcome to Scribd!

  • 9 views

    Duyên Vũ - Essay Correction

    Uploaded by

    Yến Chi
    The document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of young adults continuing to live with their parents after completing their education and finding jobs. Some advantages include saving money on bills, helping care for aging parents, and feeling a sense of familiarity. However, disadvantages are more significant and include less privacy and freedom due to parental control, more generational conflicts due to differences in perspectives between parents and children, and not gaining important life experiences and lessons that come from independent living.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd

    Duyên Vũ - Essay Correction

    Uploaded by

    Yến Chi
    9 views2 pages
    The document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of young adults continuing to live with their parents after completing their education and finding jobs. Some advantages include saving money on bills, helping care for aging parents, and feeling a sense of familiarity. However, disadvantages are more significant and include less privacy and freedom due to parental control, more generational conflicts due to differences in perspectives between parents and children, and not gaining important life experiences and lessons that come from independent living.

    Copyright

    © © All Rights Reserved

    Available Formats

    DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd

    Did you find this document useful?

    Is this content inappropriate?

    The document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of young adults continuing to live with their parents after completing their education and finding jobs. Some advantages include saving money on bills, helping care for aging parents, and feeling a sense of familiarity. However, disadvantages are more significant and include less privacy and freedom due to parental control, more generational conflicts due to differences in perspectives between parents and children, and not gaining important life experiences and lessons that come from independent living.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd
    Download as docx, pdf, or txt
    9 views2 pages

    Duyên Vũ - Essay Correction

    Uploaded by

    Yến Chi
    The document discusses the advantages and disadvantages of young adults continuing to live with their parents after completing their education and finding jobs. Some advantages include saving money on bills, helping care for aging parents, and feeling a sense of familiarity. However, disadvantages are more significant and include less privacy and freedom due to parental control, more generational conflicts due to differences in perspectives between parents and children, and not gaining important life experiences and lessons that come from independent living.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd
    Download as docx, pdf, or txt
    of 2

    ESSAY INFORMATION:

    Correction suggested by: IELTS Xuân Phi

    Question: In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their
    parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the
    advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

    In recent years, there has been a trend that the mature who are graduated and
    employed tend to move in with their parents, instead of living independently.
    While this tendency may have some positive impacts, I would argue that its
    minus points are more glaring.

    There is no denying that continuing living with parents would bring the grown-ups
    some benefits. Firstly, they could save a great deal of money. They can will save
    on rent, utility bills, grocery bills, and so forth. (WHY and HOW?) Another
    advantage of this trend is the satisfaction of helping and taking care of their
    parents. The closer people are to their parents, the more chances they can help
    them will get to help them. Especially, when the parents get severe diseases, the
    offspringoffsprings should be with them for better care at hand to take care of
    them. Moreover, living with parents would give people a sense of continuity and
    familiarity. In some cases, when people move away from their families just after
    being graduated and employed, they may feel homesick and isolated / depressed
    unfamiliar with everything surrounding them. Therefore, still being with families
    certainly brings the mature a cozy and safe feeling.

    In spite of the aforementioned advantages, still living with parents at early


    adulthood certainly produces some adverse effects on the lives of adults. The
    first one is that they might have less privacy and freedom. Mature though people
    are, they still can will be controlled and restricted by their parents. For instance,
    without their parents' permission, they cannot hang out with friends overnight or
    invite them to their houses. The uncomfortable feelings from those events can
    lead to negative emotions among adults. Even if they are allowed to do so, they
    will not feel comfortable. Secondly, still living with parents at early adulthood
    would result in more conflicts cause more generational conflicts than living alone.
    The culprit is the wide generation gap between family members the wide gap
    between two generations: the parents and their offsprings. Growing up under
    different circumstances and environments, each generation is likely to have a
    different take on how life should be lived and how the family should interact, thus
    enhancing the likelihood of quarrels. → The differences in terms of life
    perspectives can lead to quarrels. For example, … As a result, the bond among
    family members would be broken. Furthermore, adults may not gain life
    experiences when living with parents residing with parents when being mature,
    the adult could not learn hard lessons of life. There are a lot of tough lessons in
    work and life and curve balls that life throws, and learning to catch them is part of
    growing up. By living with families, people are shielding themselves from not only
    hardships, but also the valuable lessons life has to offer.

    In conclusion, while residing with parents at adulthood could do people a service,


    I would contend that the minus points of this trend outnumber its plus points.

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------
    IELTS XUÂN PHI - CHUYÊN IELTS CÁ NHÂN HÓA
    📄Tham khảo khóa chuyên sâu kỹ năng Viết:
    http://bit.ly/ChuyenSauIELTSWriting
    🚩Địa chỉ: Tòa nhà Central Point, số 219 Trung Kính, P. Yên hòa, Q. Cầu Giấy,
    Hà Nội
    🔍Website: www.ieltsxuanphi.edu.vn
    Hotline: 0916 300 750
    Email: xuanphiielts@gmail.com

    You might also like