Formal Letter Phrases and Example
Formal Letter Phrases and Example
Formal Letter Phrases and Example
Salutation
Dear Sir or Madam, Dear Mr Jenkins
4. Closing paragraph
1. Salutation
If you do not know the name of the person you are writing to, use this. It is always
advisable to try to find out a name.
Dear Mr Jenkins
If you know the name, use the title (Mr, Mrs, Miss or Ms,
Dr, etc.) and the surname only. If you are writing to a woman and do not know if she
uses Mrs or Miss, you can use Ms, which is for married and single women.
The first paragraph will generally outline the purpose for the letter and the reason
that the letter is being sent. In this first paragraph, the summary of the letter can be
found and the intentions which will be displayed through the rest of the letter should be
outlined.
Example:
You should always be polite and respectful, even if you complain. A useful way
to achieve it especially in formal letters is to use ‘modal verbs’, i.e., would,
could or should.
It’s important to write simply and clearly. It’s worth noting that you have to
avoid using informal language, for instance, avoid contractions (i.e. I’m, it’s,
etc.).
4. Closing paragraph
At the end, you will conclude the letter and finish any thoughts mentioned before, or
specify the action the recipient should take, return the money, send information, etc.
Ending examples:
Example:
Sample Model:
To be more specific ‘A green concert with school bands’ would be an excellent idea to
sensitize people on the importance of preserving our local traditions that are inextricably
linked with the Mediterranean landscape of Attica. In fact all six high schools of our
municipality could participate with one school band each in a concert that may take
place in the local stadium that can accommodate six thousand people. The bands can
play both folklore and more modern songs while local delicacies and examples of
craftwork could be exhibited at the entrance of the concert hall.
Massive participation in any campaign is the key for its success; especially when such a
noble cause -like that of ‘conservation’- is served. Helping the new generation
appreciate their natural surroundings and traditions is the most precious legacy we can
offer to our descendants. The biosphere is literary our home so it is unquestionably
important to keep it clean so that we can have fresh air to breathe and pure water to
drink.
Yours faithfully
Tips:
Always proofread your letter after writing it, check for sentence structure,
grammar, spelling mistakes…
Proofread your letter again (and again) after you have revised it.
Keep the recipient in mind, and write in a way that he/she can easily understand
the letter.
Be respectful when you write, even if you are writing a letter of complaint.
Useful phrases:
Beginning
We are writing to inform you that …/ to confirm ../ to request …/ to enquire about …
I recently read/heard about ….. and would like to know….
I am writing to offer suggestions
I am writing to receive further information about
I am writing to enquire about
Offering help
Would you like me to …?
I would be happy to …/ I am quite willing to …
I would be pleased to …
Complaining
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with …
I am writing to complain about …
Demanding action
I therefore suggest that I be given a full refund
I would be grateful if my money was refunded
I would be grateful if you could give me a full refund
Making Suggestions
My first suggestion is
First of all I suggest/ I would like to suggest
Another possibility is/ A further possibility is
I further suggest/ I would further suggest/ Secondly
Ending
I look forward to receiving your reply. / I look forward to your reply.
I look to hearing from you.
If you require further information, please do not hesitate to ask
If I can be of further assistance, please do not hesitate to ask
I will willingly provide further information on request
I am at your disposal should you require further information/ need assistance
Please do not hesitate to ask should you require further information