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    Pre-Writing Task 3-1

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    Steve is the main character who seeks revenge for his granny and other ghost residents in Kowloon Walled City Park. Jane is a ghost who lived in Kowloon Walled City when she was alive. The story takes place in Kowloon Walled City Park. Steve faces the problem of gangs threatening the ghost residents. He has a confrontation with the gangs which builds tension. In the end, Steve solves the problem by standing up to the gangs to protect the ghost residents.

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    Steve is the main character who seeks revenge for his granny and other ghost residents in Kowloon Walled City Park. Jane is a ghost who lived in Kowloon Walled City when she was alive. The story takes place in Kowloon Walled City Park. Steve faces the problem of gangs threatening the ghost residents. He has a confrontation with the gangs which builds tension. In the end, Steve solves the problem by standing up to the gangs to protect the ghost residents.

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    Steve is the main character who seeks revenge for his granny and other ghost residents in Kowloon Walled City Park. Jane is a ghost who lived in Kowloon Walled City when she was alive. The story takes place in Kowloon Walled City Park. Steve faces the problem of gangs threatening the ghost residents. He has a confrontation with the gangs which builds tension. In the end, Steve solves the problem by standing up to the gangs to protect the ghost residents.

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    Pre-Writing Task 3-1

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    Steve is the main character who seeks revenge for his granny and other ghost residents in Kowloon Walled City Park. Jane is a ghost who lived in Kowloon Walled City when she was alive. The story takes place in Kowloon Walled City Park. Steve faces the problem of gangs threatening the ghost residents. He has a confrontation with the gangs which builds tension. In the end, Steve solves the problem by standing up to the gangs to protect the ghost residents.

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    D.

    Planning your own story – Content


    I. Orientation
    i. What is the central point or theme of the story?
    (e.g. friendship/revenge/loss of a family member/something left unfinished)
    Revenge for his granny and other ghost residents in the Ghost
    ____________________________________________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________
    World version Kowloon walled City to the gangs .

    ____________________________________________________________________
    ii. What happened in the beginning of the story?
    1. Who was the main character?

    Main Character Profile


    ·
    Name: ______________________
    Steve Age: _____ Sex: M / F
    ~
    ... D

    He is average built He is freckled


    Physical appearance: ______________________________________
    and has a small nose Straight hair, black
    .

    _______________________________________________________
    eyes.
    ·
    L
    .

    He usually wear clothing like t-shirt and


    _______________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________
    jeans.
    #
    (picture)
    He likes
    helping ppl He hates
    Likes and dislikes: _____________________________________________________________
    .

    _____________________________________________________________________________
    bully ,

    Personality: ___________________________________________________________________
    out .
    , kind
    going

    A description of a character’s physical appearance might include:


    body heavy/thin, of average built/well-built, muscular, bony, skinny, etc.
    freckled, pimpled, scarred, bearded, small nose, thick/thin lips, straight/crooked
    face
    teeth, pointy chin, square jaw, red cheeks, shiny forehead, etc.
    hair straight, curly, blonde, grey, silver, white, shaved head, bald, etc.
    eyes round/narrow, brown, blue, a black eye, bags under the eyes, thick eyebrows, etc.
    clothing white shirt, blue jeans, grey jacket, long dress, black hat, red scarf, old shoes, etc.

    2. Who were the other characters?


    Jane the
    Granny She is a ghost and lived in
    ________________________________________________________________
    .

    Kowloon Walled
    City when she was alive,
    ________________________________________________________________
    3. Where did the story take place?
    Kowloon Walled
    ________________________________________________________________
    City Park
    ________________________________________________________________
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    4. When did the story happen?
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________

    iii. Choose a way to begin your story and write your opening here.
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________

    II. Complication
    i. What problems/conflicts did the main character face? Did the main character have
    a different value, viewpoint or interest from other characters?
    (e.g. The main character was accused of a crime he/she didn’t commit.)
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________

    III. Series of Events


    i. What happened to the main character?
    ii. What were the things that build up the tension?
    (e.g. Other characters had opposing goals which might affect the main characters.)

    Event 1: _________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    Event 2: _________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________

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    IV. Resolution
    i. How did the main character solve the problems/conflicts?
    ________________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________________
    ________________________________________________________________________

    Below Average (1M) Average (2M) Good (3M)


    Orientation
    Opening
    Complication
    Series of events
    Resolution
    Total (30 marks) ________________/15 x 2 = ________________

    E. Accuracy
    I. Use descriptive language
    i. Five senses
    ii. Vivid wordings and actions (please refer to your additional vocabulary list for action
    verbs)
    II. Use simple wordings and shorter sentences (please refer to the story sample for
    reference).
    III. Tenses – Read the short story, ‘Skeleton On the Dunny’, and answer the following
    questions.
    i. Which tense is mainly used in the story?
    ________________________________
    ii. Why does the writer use this tense form?
    To talk about things that happened in the past and are now completed.
    iii. What are the tenses used in the dialogue? Why?
     Simple present – to talk about facts, habitual actions
     Present Continuous – to talk about things that are happening at the moment of
    speaking
     Simple past – to talk about things that happened in the past and are now completed
     Simple future – to talk about things that will happen in the future

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