Literature Review Rough Draft 1
Literature Review Rough Draft 1
Literature Review Rough Draft 1
Professor Gonzalez
ENC1102
8 March 2024
Literature Review
For my research paper this semester, I am writing about how social media can be toxic to
users, but more specifically how GRWM TikToks, productivity videos, and the “it girl” aesthetic
can cause mental health problems amongst younger girls. For my research I have gathered six
articles, journal entries, and papers to analyze what other people have found on this topic. Each
source adds a different perspective on my claim because they all discuss different things about
The first source I chose is Bella Hadid Shares Tearful Photos of Her Mental Health
‘Roller Coaster’ written by Carolyn L. Todd. This article was intriguing to me because although
I am researching how social media allows for an unrealistic expectation of reality and life to be
shown, celebrities also struggle with it as well and it’s not just “normal” people who deal with
this issue. This source is different from all of the other five because I feel that it is overlooked
how celebrities still have emotions just like the rest of us, and they can get caught up in the
fakeness of social media. Hadid made a post on Instagram in 2021 discussing how just because
her life looks amazing and perfect on social media, doesn’t mean it actually is.
The second article I chose is titled The Power of Social Media: Stigmatizing Content
Affects Perceptions of Mental Health Care written by Sarah K. Competiello, George Y. Bizer,
and D. Catherine Walker. This source is different from the other ones I chose because it conducts
a study that proves the things people read on social media affect their emotions afterwards. The
purpose of this source was to show how easily people can be affected by what they read on social
media. The article also came to the conclusion that there are a large number of people who have
mental health issues but don't reach out for help, and this is because of what they read on social
media.
My third source is 13 Social Media Plugged In: How Media Attract and Affect Youth
written by Valkenburg, Patti M., and Jessica Taylor Piotrowski. This article focuses on the
feedback people receive on social media, which isn’t necessarily included in my other sources.
The theme of this source is to show how easily people can leave negative comments on people's
social media profiles. If people post public GRWM and productivity videos, they will be
dramatically more likely to receive hateful comments, which can be destructive to the content
Surveillance, and Subversion on YouTube written by Amy Lynne Hill. This article differs from
all of my other sources but still supports my claim because it talks about all of the editing that
goes on behind making videos for social media. Instead of talking about all the toxicity caused to
viewers after they are posted, it goes into detail about the editing that the creators do to make
their videos seem more aesthetic, put together, and to make themselves look more flawless.
The fifth source I will be using is Becoming “That Girl”: A Digital Ethnography of
Productivity and Wellness Culture on YouTube written by Kate Norton. This source is different
from the other sources because it is another paper written by a student at the University of
Chicago, that is researching and analyzing the same topic that I am writing about. This author
focuses on the “it girl” aesthetic which is often used in productivity videos or “day in the life”
videos to make the creators life seem more aesthetic and energetic. Unlike my other sources, this
paper goes into detail about specific things celebrities and influencers unintentionally say that
My last source is titled 9 Wellness TikTok: Morning Routines, Eating Well, and Getting
Ready to Be “That Girl” written by Katlin Marisol Sweeney-Romero. This article discusses the
different TikTok trends that allows people to “romanticize” their life and make it seem better
than it actually is. The author adds in popular hashtags that were popular as well as the “it girl”
aesthetics. The article discusses how even though influencers and celebrities post healthy
lifestyle videos thinking they are promoting a well being, it can be overwhelming to the viewers
to feel that they have to live up to the expectations that content creators seem to have as a normal
lifestyle.
Works Cited
Todd, C. L. (2021, November 10). Bella Hadid shares tearful photos of her mental health “roller
coaster.” SELF.
https://www.self.com/story/bella-hadid-mental-health-struggles-instagram
Competiello, Sarah K, et al. “The Power of Social Media: Stigmatizing Content Affects
Perceptions of Mental Health Care.” Social Media and Society, vol. 9, no. 4, 1 Oct. 2023,
https://doi.org/10.1177/20563051231207847.
Valkenburg, Patti M., and Jessica Taylor Piotrowski. Plugged In: How Media Attract and Affect
www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt1n2tvjd.16?searchText=social+media+affects+mental+health&s
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YouTube.
https://mediarep.org/server/api/core/bitstreams/c7141d34-580d-437b-a655-807ff52f8cc3/
Norton, Kate. “Becoming “That Girl”: A Digital Ethnography of Productivity and Wellness
Sweeney-Romero, Katlin M. “Wellness TikTok: Morning Routines, Eating Well, and Getting
Ready to Be “That Girl.”” TikTok Cultures in the United States, 1 Jan. 2022,
www.academia.edu/85307816/Wellness_TikTok_Morning_Routines_Eating_Well_and_