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Over the past decades, population growth has become a pressing global issue witnessed in
many countries all over the world. Particularly, in Vietnam, => Particularly in Vietnmam some
megacities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh city have incurred this problem currently => are
currently suffering from this problem and it is necessary that some solutions such as
education or bringing in new law be worked out => It is necessary to develop solutions such
as education and new laws to address overpopulation. On the one hand, One possible solution
would be to raise people's awareness of family planning. Governments or some big => large
organizations could hold => implement family planning programs to educate people,
especially young people => the young, about sexual health and responsible parenthood,
which can help reduce => thereby reducing unintended pregnancies. This can also significantly
reduce the mortality rate and abortion rate => mortality and abortion rates. Additionally, sex
education should also be applied=> incorporated in school curricular (chương trình học) to
broaden kids' knowledge about sex and pregnancy at an early age. Furthermore, another
effective solution is to enact => provide tax concessions for married couples who can limit the
number of their offspring they have. This can be a financial problem that those who bear over
the limited children should take into consideration => This financial incentive(sự khuyến
khích)=> incentivise (v) >< demoralize (v): làm nản chí would encourage families to
consider the economic implications (tác động kinh tế) of having more children. In
conclusion, the explosive growth of the population in major cities can be addressed by=>
managed through some remedies(=solutions) such as providing => enhanced education and
passing a new law => implementation of new laws.
establish strong = lay solid fundation for : hình thành nền tảng vững chắc
a great number of = a multitude of = a host of = a wealth of (reasons why)
ranging from A -and...- to B ( ranging from maths to economics)
contention: opinion
=> It's my contention that/ I contend that
namely = including= such as
favor Ving: đồng tình, ủng hộ cái gì
Given this: xét về khía cạnh nào đó (đề cập ở trên -> Ad, Dis)
overlook: bỏ qua
multifaceted role: nhiều khía cạnh nhiều mặt
to name/mention but a few: vân vân
Ex: A,B and C, to name but a few
Write a paragraph of about 180-200 words concerning the
following topic:
Nowadays violence is on the increase among teenagers in
many schools. Suggest some solutions to this problem.
These days, the number of violent incidents committed by teenagers at school

committed by teenagers is rising.
To effectively address this issue , some => a variety of remedies(=solutions) are

required, including improved education and mental support from parents and the
community.
Firstly, one possible solution to this problem would be to provide teenagers => youth
with comprehensive(toàn diện = holistic) education=>teaching.
Schools should incorporate (kết hợp) character education programs that emphasize
sympathy and conflict resolution (giải quyết xung đột) into the official curriculum,
thereby helping students manage stress, anger and emotions.
In addition, schools=>educational insitutions can offer some => a diverse range of

extracurricular activities such as gardening or playing outdoor games to create a
healthy environment. (Hạn chế dùng S + should/can/must…. -> dùng nhiều quá)
Furthermore, parents and the community=> public play a vital role in preventing teen
violence.
Parents => Guardians (người bảo hộ) should spend more time caring for their
offspring’s negative => adverse emotions to counsel (tư vấn - sb on sth-) teenagers on
dealing with them.
They ought to recognize => be vigilant about (cảnh giác về) the abnormalities in
their children’s behaviors => their children's emotional state to provide
appropriate support and guidance when needed.
Local communities can also establish after-school programs, outdoor activities and
sports centers which help teenagers => youngsters use their idle time effectively.
In conclusion, holistic support sources from parents, schools and communities =>
society could alleviate violence in teenagers => juveniles and create a safer and more
supportive environment for them.

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Over the past decades, population growth has become a pressing global issue witnessed in

These days, the number of violent incidents committed by teenagers at school

To effectively address this issue , some => a variety of remedies(=solutions) are

In addition, schools=>educational insitutions can offer some => a diverse range of

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