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Learning EFL Writing in Vietnam: Voices from
An Upper-Secondary School’s Students
Thi Thuy Loan Nguyen
VASS College of Vocational Education, Australia
Writing in English is difficult for multi-lingual learners, and this is not an exception for Vietnamese
students who learnt English as-a-foreign-language (EFL). However, few studies have been conducted
on how these learners learnt this skill at their up-secondary schools (U-SS). This study thus plans to
explore how 335 Vietnamese students at a U-SS perceived the importance of EFL writing, how they
learnt it and what difficulties and expectations/suggestions they had in making the learning of this
skill effectively. Employing a 5-point Likert-scale survey, open-ended questions and a focus-group
interview, the study found these learners’ awareness of the significance of this skill for their future
betterment. Moreover, similar to students in other EFL settings, these students learnt this skill for
learning other language skills, and their teachers did not have enough time to teach and provide
feedback on their writing. However, their positive attitudes and how to learn this skill were greatly
influenced by their teachers and educational conditions. These findings are therefore expected to shed
more light on learners’ perspectives in learning EFL writing at the U-SS level so that relevant support
can be provided to help the learning of this skill in Vietnam and in similar EFL contexts.
Keywords: Vietnamese learners, high-school students, English writing, learning writing,
challenges
Introduction
EFL Writing: Significance and Challenges
Writing is “a flexible tool” that writers can use to meet a variety of goals in life (Graham & Perin, 2007,
p. 445). However, writing is considered to be the most difficult skill, especially writing in English, for
EFL learners to master. It is because it requires them to have a certain amount of knowledge about the
target language; namely, the rhetorical organizations and appropriate language use with which they would
like to communicate to their readers (Matsuda, 2019). Harmer (2007) states that this skill should be taught
to students because through the visual demonstration of how language is constructed, they will acquire
the language and reinforce what they have learned. Due to the complex nature of English-writing and
limited linguistic knowledge of EFL learners; however, teaching and learning English-writing in EFL
contexts is a challenging process (Derakhshan & Shirejini, 2020; Ghoorchaei & Khosravi, 2019; Nguyen,
2021; Syafii & Miftah, 2020). It is true that besides learning the language, EFL learners need to learn how
to develop their ideas in order to produce texts with the rhetorical features that they have never had in
their first language (L1). Derakhshan and Shirejini (2020) also say that while L1 writers face difficulties
in fluency of writing, EFL writers encounter challenges of linguistic aspects and writing strategies. As
stated by Ghoorchaei and Khosravi (2019) and Nguyen and Suwannabubpha (2021), this challenge would
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be compounded if students did not learn this skill in their previous schooling.
Several studies on teachers’ and learners’ difficulties in teaching and learning EFL writing in various
EFL contexts were conducted. In Bangladesh, teachers’ common problems in teaching EFL writing at
secondary school levels were students’ memorizing writing rather than producing it, large class size, short
class duration, insufficient training for teachers and improper curriculum (Islam et al., 2019). Besides
receiving no clear feedback from teachers, Bangladeshi students were reported not to have enough
vocabulary and grammar knowledge and ideas for writing (Islam et al., 2019). Similarly, Sun (2010)
noted that Chinese students found it hard to express their ideas and feelings freely and fluently, and they
commonly made mistakes in using vocabulary and grammar in writing in English. In Thailand, U-SS
teachers and students were identified having various personal and contextual problems in teaching and
learning EFL writing (Nguyen & Suwannabubpha, 2021). Like Bangladeshi counterparts, Thai English
teachers had time constraint, insufficient resources and poorly-motivated and mixed-ability students.
Moreover, the national test structures and untrained teachers of English were also claimed to account for
the challenges in teaching EFL writing in Thailand. Similar to the documented problems by Sun (2010),
Nguyen and Suwannabubpha (2021) also found that Thai U-SS students did not have enough knowledge
of grammar and vocabulary, resulting in their difficulties in writing in English. In Indonesia, grade-nine
students were found to have problems with English and general intellectual skills to generate and
organize ideas in coherent and logical ways (Syafii & Miftah, 2020). Like students in other EFL contexts
(Islam et al., 2019; C. T. K. Nguyen, 2019; Nguyen, 2021; Nguyen & Suwannabubpha, 2021; Sun, 2010),
these Indonesian lower secondary school learners were not competent in grammar and vocabulary use
(Syafii & Miftah, 2020). In Vietnam, as reported by Nguyen (2009), writing teachers had problems in
raising their students’ awareness of the importance of EFL writing, teaching them to write in English, and
assessing students’ writing skills. Furthermore, in her research on Vietnamese U-SS teachers’ difficulties
in teaching EFL writing, Nguyen (2021) found that teachers’ lack of time, heavy contents in the textbooks,
the multiple-choice test formats, large classes, students’ dislike of this skill and students’ insufficient
knowledge of grammar and vocabulary challenged the teaching and learning of this skill at their schools.
Current Situation of English Language Teaching (ELT) in Vietnam
English is a compulsory foreign language subject to students from primary schools to tertiary
institutions in Vietnam. According to the policy ‘National Foreign Language 2020 Project’ (hereby, the
Project) proclaimed by Ministry of Education and Training (MOET), since 2008 English has been taught
as a compulsory subject from Grade 3 in the mainstream national curriculum (rather than from Grade 6 as
previously implemented). The aim of this Project is to enhance the quality of English language teaching
and learning in the national education system (Hoang, 2016). In particular, the Project focuses on
developing effective English language users who can function successfully across linguistic and cultural
boundaries (Hoang, 2016; Tran & Tanemura, 2020). Consequently, a series of new English textbooks
have been produced for use in schools nationwide since 2012 in order to cultivate students’
communicative competence and prepare them to become global citizens. These textbooks are organized
into themes/topics (units) with the focus on two oral skills (listening and speaking) at primary level and
four macro-skills (listening, speaking, reading and writing) at upper-secondary level. Different linguistic
elements (pronunciation, vocabulary, grammar) and intercultural aspects are also included in each unit.
The communicative competence levels from the Common European Framework of Reference (CEFR)
were used as important bases for these textbooks’ development and the development of competence
framework for each grade and each level of education (Le, 2019). As stated in the Project, students are
required to achieve A1 at primary level, A2 at lower-secondary level and B1 at upper-secondary level.
Besides training teachers to be able to exploit the textbooks effectively, standard teaching and learning
facilities at school have been improved in order to meet the learning outcomes required by MOET.
Although MOET places a strong emphasis on the English language in the national curriculum, research
on how this Project has been implemented tends to be scarce. Furthermore, a few studies were conducted
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on how each language skill was taught and learnt at these basic educational levels while the Project aims
to help all young Vietnamese people have a complete mastery of the language for their future
communicative needs after leaving school (Parks, 2011). The study on U-SS teachers’ influential factors
and responses in terms of their pedagogies to this reform by Le and Le (2020) showed that students’
levels, students’ attitudes, and learning culture greatly influenced the teachers’ practices in response to the
government’s ELT pedagogical reforms. Additionally, this study also revealed that teachers’ time
constraint and the incongruity between teaching approaches and the national exam in the reform
movement resulted in their resistance to change. As found in Nguyen (2012) and Trinh and Nguyen
(2014) and based on the recent test results from the Educational Testing Service (ETS), writing has been
the most problematic to Vietnamese test-takers. This issue could be explained by the low quality of ELT
in Vietnam (Le, 2019), the impact of Vietnamese cultures and testing and assessment on learners’ EFL
writing (Nguyen, 2009; Trinh & Nguyen, 2014). In a recent study on Vietnamese U-SS teachers’ views,
practices, challenges and expectations in teaching EFL writing by Nguyen (2021), it was found that these
teachers were confident about their pedagogical and content knowledge (PCK), and they knew how to
apply different teaching techniques to teach different writing genres. However, the multiple-choice test
formats, the heavy contents in the new textbooks, their limited time, students’ not learning ELF writing at
elementary and secondary school levels and students’ insufficient knowledge of grammar and vocabulary
were reported to challenge the teaching of this skill at the U-SS in the South of Vietnam (Nguyen, 2021).
Furthermore, these teachers also suggested including the writing-skill section in all in-class assessment
and national tests in order to encourage students to learn this skill.
The findings from these previous studies have provided us some insights into the challenges
Vietnamese U-SS teachers faced and their expectations to ease the practical issues in teaching EFL
writing at their educational contexts since the implementation of the Project. However, to the researcher’s
best knowledge, there tends to be the scarcity of research on how Vietnamese students at the basic
educational levels in the national curriculum study EFL writing. This study thus attempts to explore how
students of all levels/grades 10, 11 and 12 (G10, G11, & G12) at a U-SS in the South of Vietnam learn
this skill. In particular, the study plans to investigate not only the difficulties faced by these Vietnamese
U-SS students in learning EFL writing but also their views on the importance of EFL writing, their ways
of learning this skill and their suggestions and expections from their teachers to teach this skill at their USS school. The research questions (RQs) posited for this study are as follows:
1) What are Vietnamese U-SS students’ views on the importance of EFL writing?
2) How do they learn EFL writing at school?
3) What are their difficulties in learning EFL writing at school?
4) What are their expectations/suggestions for making the learning of this skill better?
The answers to these questions are expected to shed more light on learners’ perspectives, learning
practices, difficulties and expectations in learning this skill at the U-SS level in Vietnam. Furthermore,
understanding the challenges by EFL learners and their expectations should be one of a great source of
information for teachers to make informed decisions on their teaching approach in appropriately
developing this skill for their respective learners. The results of this study are hoped to provide some
understanding for relevant and timely support from teachers for the effectiveness of teaching and learning
this skill in the context of Vietnam and in similar EFL contexts.
Method
A descriptive qualitative research design by Creswell (2012) was employed in this study because its
main subjects were students who learnt this skill at a U-SS school in the South of Vietnam. Through
descriptive research, the researcher was able to fully comprehend the learners’ views, learning practices,
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challenges in learning EFL writing and suggestions/ expectations from their teachers in teaching them
EFL writing.
Participants and Context
This study was conducted with all 335 students (208 females & 127 males) of G10, G11 and G12 from
a small U-SS school in a Southern province of Vietnam. Their ages ranged from 15 to 17, and they learnt
English as a foreign language since Grade 3 at their elementary schools. Because the educational system
in Vietnam is centralized, based on MOET’s guidelines, the Department of Education and Training
(DET) in this province developed a detailed framework for the English curricula for all educational levels.
This framework includes the number of tests, test structures and the time allocated to teach this subject
for each educational level and each unit in the textbooks. According to the framework, the textbook series
by Van et al. (2016) joint-published by the Educational Publishing House and Pearson Education were
employed to teach students in the province. The books were reported to have adopted a theme-based
curriculum approved by MOET. Each book contained 16 teaching and five review units to be taught over
a period of 105 instructional hours, with three periods of 45 minutes each per week. Each unit contained
various sections focused on developing students’ linguistic knowledge, language skills and intercultural
knowledge. To prepare G12 students for the national exam, their regular and end-of-term tests are
required to be in the multiple-choice format while 40%-45% of the tests for both G10-11 students are in
constructed-response forms in which students are asked to use correct tenses, rewrite sentences and write
a certain text type (e.g., emails, paragraphs, job application letters) using given prompts. Because of the
absence of the writing section in the national exam, this U-SS allowed teachers not to teach EFL writing
to G12 students in order to save time for G12 students to do practice tests. In other words, teachers
skipped the writing lessons in the textbooks when they taught G12 students.
Data Collection
The 5-point Likert-scale survey with 21 items (Tables 1, 2, 4 & 5) adopted from Nguyen and
Suwannabubpha (2021) was employed to study these U-US learners’ views on the importance of EFL
writing, their ways of learning, difficulties and expectations and/or suggestions on how EFL teachers at
U-SS should help students learn EFL writing effectively. This was because their survey was developed to
address the same objectives as those in the current study with a similar group of students who learnt
English as a foreign language in Thailand. However, in order to learn how U-SS students in Vietnam felt
and what actions they took about EFL writing when they did not study this skill at G12, five items about
this aspect (Table 3) were added into the adopted survey, resulting 26 surveyed items in total. Another
small modification to their survey was that it was written in both Vietnamese and English to ensure that
the Vietnamese U-SS students in this study would fully understand each surveyed item.
With the permission of the school principal, the Google form was employed, and the survey was
delivered to all students at the end of the school year. Similar to Nguyen and Suwannabubpha (2021),
besides 26 5-point Likert-scale items, one open-ended question for each surveyed category was also
included for the participants to add their own views, ways of learning, difficulties and
expectations/suggestions if they were not listed in the survey. In order to better understand the findings
from the survey, the focus-group interview with 40 volunteer students was conducted in Vietnamese
language (See Appendix).
Data Analysis
To understand students’ views, learning practices, difficulties and expectations/suggestions on how
they learnt EFL writing at their U-SS, the mean scores of all items in the survey were calculated with the
employment of SPSS. Their self-reported responses to the open-ended questions in each category were
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independently read and classified into themes by the researcher and an inter-rater who is a university
lecturer with a PhD degree in applied linguistics. For example, in their self-reports on the importance of
EFL writing, “study overseas”, “expand knowledge from reading online news” and “communicate on
social media” were classified into the same category/theme “Doors to outside world”. Discussion on the
differences between the two coders was then conducted to achieve the complete agreement on the theme
classification. Then, the findings from the surveys and the open-ended questions were interpreted together
with the focus-group interview data. However, only the related information was translated and included in
the manuscript for a better understanding of the research findings.
Findings
This section presents the findings from the survey (Tables 1, 2, 3, 4 & 5) and the participants’ selfreports from the open-ended questions (Figures 1, 2, 3 & 4) on their views, ways of learning, difficulties
and suggestions/expectations in learning EFL writing at their U-SS. These findings are oraganized in the
order of the RQs. The discussion on the reported findings with the data from the focus-group interview
with 40 students will be provided in the next section.
As recommended by Sullivan and Artino (2013) that a mean score is not a very helpful measure of
central tendency of Likert-scale data, the percentages of students’ positive (strongly agree & agree),
neutral and negative (strongly disagree & disagree) attitudes are also included in Tables 1, 2 3, 4 and 5.
Moreover, Wiboolsri (2008) suggested that the mean score of 3.5 is considered as the acceptable value
representing a positive attitude.
Students’ Views on the Importance of EFL Writing
As seen in Table 1, four out of five items (Items 1, 2, 3 & 4) received a mean score higher than 3.5,
which indicated that these Vietnamese U-SS students’ agreements on the importance of writing. In
particular, a majority of them thought EFL writing is important for their future jobs (82.1%) and almost
75% of them agreed that EFL writing helped them use English better. While more than two thirds of them
shared the view that EFL writing assist them in learning other language skills (Item 3), 54,45% of the
participants thought this skill is difficult for them as high school students. With the lowest mean score
(3.18), Item 5 indicated that more than half of the participants did not think that EFL writing helped them
think in English-thinking ways.
TABLE 1
Students’ Views on the Importance of English Writing
No
1
2
3
4
5
Items
English writing is important for my future jobs
Writing in English helps me improve my ability to use
English
Writing in English supports me to learn other language
skills
English writing is difficult for me
Writing in English helps me think logically and critically
by organizing my ideas in English-thinking ways
Mean
Positive(%)
Neutral(%)
Negative(%)
4.15
4.00
82.1
73.7
12.2
21.8
5.7
4.5
3.79
67.7
25.4
6.9
3.59
3.18
54.4
42.2
35.5
19.7
10.1
33.1
Figure 1 below summarizes the participants’ self-reported views on the importance of EFL writing.
Their answers to the open-opened questions in this category were consistent with their views on the
surveyed items (Items 1, 2 & 3) as they reported that EFL writing helped them with jobs, international
tests (IELTS & TOEFL), presentations and other language skills, and vocabulary and grammar
improvement and acquisition (16.70%, 10.15%, 7.76% & 5.40%, respectively). Besides these, 4.18% of
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them reported that this skill helped them think logically and build up their confidence while a small
percentage of them (2.08%) believed that EFL writing could open their doors to the outside world.
Students' Self-reported Views on the Importance of EFL Writing
Doors to outside world
Logical thinking and confidence
2.08%
4.18%
Grammar acquisition
5.40%
Vocabulary improvement
7.76%
Presentation and other language skills
10.15%
Jobs and international tests
Figure 1. Students’ self-reported views on the importance of EFL writing.
How Students Learnt EFL Writing at School
Table 2 shows these Vietnamese students’ learning practices at their U-SS school. Among eight
surveyed items in Table 2, only Items 1 (I write in English to learn vocabulary) and 2 (I write in English
when I do grammar, reading and listening exercises) received a mean score higher than 3.5. With the
mean scores of 3.35 and 3.30, Items 3 and 4 gained the agreement of around half of these learners (46%
& 51.6%, respectively) while Items 5 to 8 received the mean scores lower than 3.0. In particular, there
were only 6% of the participants agreed that their tests did not have a writing section (Item 8), and around
75% of them showed their neutrality and disagreement to Items 5, 6 and 7 which surveyed the ways their
teachers taught this skill in class. It is generally accepted that most of the neutral comments apparently
lean towards negative outcomes. The combined average percentages of their being neutral and negative to
these items thus means that English writing was included in their tests (Item 8) and their teachers focused
on teaching this skill in class to a reasonable extent (Items 5, 6 & 7).
TABLE 2
How Students Learnt EFL Writing at School
No
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
Items
I write in English to learn vocabulary
I write in English when I do grammar, reading and listening
exercises
My teachers check all of my writing
My teachers teach me in detail how to write each writing task
In class, my teachers explain the writing quickly and ask me
to do the writing at home
I don’t learn writing because teachers do not teach me
My teachers do not focus on teaching English writing at all
English writing is not included in my tests
Mean
3.82
3.65
Positive%
69.8
59.6
Neutral%
24.2
28.7
Negative%
6.0
10.7
3.35
3.30
2.87
46
51.6
31.3
36.1
23.6
31.3
17.9
24.8
37.4
2.54
2.12
1.88
29
9.6
6
18.2
25.4
16.7
52.8
65.1
77.3
Besides the surveyed items in Table 2, these U-SS students also reported how they studied EFL writing.
As can be seen in Figure 2, almost a quarter of them learnt this skill through listening to music on YouTube,
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reading online newspapers, playing games and using online learning applications. Additionally, they also
mentioned learning vocabulary and grammar frequently (19.40% & 14.03%, respectively) as their method
of learning EFL writing. Self-studying at home and actively participating in class activities were also
reported to be their strategies in learning this skill by 8.66% and 7.16% of these students. While 3.28% of
them communicated with foreigners as their technique in learning EFL writing, 1.19% of them reported that
they learnt this skill by translating from Vietnamese into English and having a passion for English.
Students' Self-reported Views on How They Studied EFL Writing
Translating Vietnamese-English & versus
1.19%
Interest in learning English
1.19%
Communicating with foreigners
3.28%
Active participation in class activities
7.16%
Self-study at home
8.66%
Frequent reviewing grammar
14.03%
Frequent learning vocabulary
19.40%
English media, games and learning apps
Figure 2. Students’ self-reported views on they studied EFL writing.
Students’ Feelings and Actions When Not Studying EFL writing at G12
As can be seen in Table 3, about two-thirds of these U-SS students showed their agreement to Items 1
and 2 which stated they kept learning grammar and vocabulary, and found the opportunities to write in
English when this skill was not taught at G12. Moreover, 63.9% of them did not think it was good when
they were not taught this skill at G12 because they believed this skill was important (Item 3). With the
low mean scores (2.84 & 2.65) and very high percentages of neutrality and disagreement, Items 4 and 5
tend to show that these students wanted to study this skill when they were in G12.
TABLE 3
Students’ Feelings and Actions When They Did Not Study EFL Writing at G12
No
1
2
3
4
5
Items
I try to improve my English grammar and vocabulary to
help me improve my writing
I try to find opportunities to write in English (like diary,
messages to my friends, etc.)
I don’t think it is good because writing is an important skill
I feel good because I don’t have time to study this difficult
skill
I feel happy because I don’t like writing in English
Mean
Positive%
Neutral%
Negative%
3.81
65.9
26.0
8.1
3.73
64.5
26.6
9.9
3.71
2.84
63.9
6.9
28.4
42.4
7.8
33.4
2.65
17.3
43.0
39.7
Students’ Difficulties in Learning EFL Writing
As can be seen in Table 4 and Figure 3, these students believed that their lack of vocabulary and
grammar knowledge was the main cause of their difficulty in learning EFL writing. In particular, with
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the highest mean (4.08), Item 1 (Table 4) which stated “I do not have enough vocabulary, and I am not
good at English grammar” gained 78.7% of their agreement. The same challenge was also self-reported
by 45.97% and 31.60% of these learners (Figure 3). With the agreement of two thirds of them and with
the mean higher than 3.5, Item 2 showed that the differences between English and Vietnamese writing
styles made these U-SS students find this skill difficult. However, Item 3 (I do not know the importance
of writing in English) tended to confirm their knowing the importance of EFL writing as it received a low
mean (2.61) and a high combined percentage of neutrality and disagreement. In addition to these, 17.01%
of these U-SS students also reported that their lack of ideas in writing made this skill hard for them to
learn, and 5.37% of them noted that learning this skill was difficult because they did not have an effective
way of learning (Figure 3). Moreover, 3.28% of the participants revealed that learning this skill required
time, which made it challenging for them. Besides these, teachers’ insufficient feedback on students’
writing was reported to make the learning of this skill hard for this group of students, and this difficulty
was claimed by 2.38% of them. Finally, 1.19% of these students disclosed that having no interest in
learning English made their learning EFL writing difficult.
TABLE 4
Students’ Difficulties in Learning EFL Writing
No
1
2
3
Items
I do not have enough vocabulary, and I am not good at
English grammar
I do not know how to write in English (differences in
writing styles between Vietnamese and English languages)
I do not know the importance of writing in English
Mean
4.08
Positive%
78.7
Neutral%
16.2
Negative%
5.1
3.75
66
22.7
11.3
2.61
16.1
43
40.9
Students’ self-reported difficulties in learning EFL writing
No interest in learning English
Insufficient teacher feedback
Time consuming
Lack of effective learning ways
Lack of ideas
1.19%
2.38%
3.28%
5.37%
17.01%
Lack of grammar knowledge
31.60%
Lack of vocabulary
Figure 3. Students’ self-reported difficulties in learning EFL writing.
Students’ Expectations/Suggestions for Teachers to teach EFL Writing Effectively
In terms of these students’ expectations and suggestions, Item 1 (Teachers should have good
knowledge of teaching writing skills) had the highest mean (3.73), followed by Item 2 (Teachers should
spend more time correcting students’ writing). These two items gained the agreement of around twothirds of the participants (Table 5). Another item receiving a positive attitude with a mean of 3.51 by 52%
of these U-SS students was Item 3, which states that “Teachers should organize writing activities in an
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interesting way”. This expectation was also disclosed by 17.90% of the participants in their self-reports
(Figure 4). With the mean scores slightly lower than 3.5, Items 4 and 5 were supported by 43.4% and
42.3%, respectively. This tends to suggest that more than half of these students did not agree that more
focus on teaching of EFL writing was needed in class (Item 4) and confirmed that their tests already had
writing components (Item 5). However, as seen in Figure 4, 7.46% of them expected to have more time in
class for them to learn and practice this skill, and 2.69% would like to have more extra activities outside
the class. Similar to Item 2, 3.88% of the participants expected their teachers to give detailed and timely
feedback on their writing (Figure 4). 3.28% of these students also suggested that their teachers should
teach and check students’ vocabulary frequently while 2.08% of them expected their teachers to teach
them grammar. Besides interesting class activities, detailed and timely feedback and teaching vocabulary
and grammar, these U-SS students would like their teachers to give them practical writing topics (topics
related to their daily life and of their interest) and allow them to choose their own topics for writing and
do their writing at home (1.79% & 1.19%, respectively).
TABLE 5
Students’ Expectations/Suggestions
No
1
2
3
4
5
Items
Teachers should have good knowledge of teaching writing
skills
Teachers should spend more time correcting students’
writing
Teachers should organize writing activities in an interesting
way
Teachers should focus more on teaching writing skills in
class
Tests should have writing components
Mean
3.83
Positive%
65.6
Neutral%
29.9
Negative%
4.5
3.73
62.7
31.9
5.4
3.51
52
30.4
17.6
3.47
43.3
44.8
9.9
3.36
42.4
41.3
16.3
Students’ self-reported expectations/suggestions to their EFL writing teachers
Choice in selecting writing topics and writing at home
Practical writing topics
Teaching grammar
More extra activities to use English
Frequent teaching and checking students’ vocabulary
Detailed and timely feedback on students’ writing
More time to teach writing skills and practice in class
1.19%
1.79%
2.08%
2.69%
3.28%
3.88%
7.46%
Interesting learning atmosphere in class
Figure 4. Students’ self-reported expectations/suggestions to their EFL writing teachers.
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Discussion
The findings from the survey showed that these Vietnamese U-SS students recognized the importance
of EFL writing. That was reflected through their agreement with the high means scores to the items
surveyed on the importance of EFL writing (Items 1, 2 & 3, Table 1). Also, they did not feel good when
they were not taught this skill at G12 (Items 3, 4 & 5, Table 3), and 84% of them showed their neutrality
and disagreement to Item 3, Table 4 (I do not know the importance of writing in English). Their positive
attitude to learning this skill was also seen in their answers to the open-ended question in this category
(Figure 1) when they self-reported that EFL writing helped them secure future jobs, have good scores in
the international tests (IELTS & TOEFL) and make good presentations. Although 54,45% of these
Vietnamese U-SS students thought this skill is difficult for them as high school students (Item 4, Table 1),
two-thirds of them believed that EFL writing helped them learn other language skills better, expand
vocabulary and improve grammar knowledge. As revealed in the focus-group interviews, their teachers
kept encouraging them to study this skill by telling stories of its importance in job application or securing
a scholarship for overseas study. This information was also reported in Nguyen (2021) in her study of
Vietnamese U-SS teachers’ views on the importance of teaching EFL. Because of the problems faced by
their graduate students, these teachers made the best efforts to teach this skill and encouraged students to
learn it although they had limited time in class and knew that it was not tested in the national exams.
Furthermore, with the Project’s emphasis on improving the English level of young Vietnamese, good
IELTS scores have recently been accepted as an entrance ticket to some good universities in Vietnam.
This motivated these students to learn writing for this test in order to secure a place at their favorite
university. Also, with IELTS scores, students would have a chance to get a scholarship to study overseas,
and that was also explained in the interview on why they stated EFL writing helped to open the “doors to
the outside world” in their self-reports. These findings tend to suggest that these Vietnamese U-SS
students’ positive attitudes towards learning EFL writing were greatly influenced by their teachers and the
contextual factors. Such extrinsic sources of motivation could generate these learners’ intrinsic
motivation in learning this skill (Adugna, 2019; Stone, 2017). Besides this, due to the project-based
learning approach their teachers followed in teaching English, these students also revealed that writing
their scripts in English helped them do their group-projects presentation better.
Regarding how writing helped these Vietnamese U-SS students learn other language skills, improve
vocabulary and learn grammar, their explanation was exactly the same as that of their Thai counterparts
in Nguyen and Suwannabubpha (2021). When they learned this skill, their vocabulary and grammar was
also consolidated, and with the newly-gained knowledge, they felt motivated and more confident to learn
other skills and aspects of English. This can be seen from their self-reports on how they learnt this skill
outside the class (Figure 2), and the survey on what they did when they did not study EFL writing at G12
(Table 3). In fact, these students reported to learn this skill in many ways (YouTube, online newspapers,
games and learning applications, self-study at home) (Figure 2) and find opportunities to write in English
(e.g., diary, messages to friends) (Item 2, Table 3) and kept learning vocabulary and grammar (Item 1,
Table 3). Moreover, the findings from the survey (Table 2) and their self-report (Figure 2) indicated that
in class they studied this skill as “a means” or “writing for learning” (Harmer, 2007, p. 34) because
around two-thirds of them agreed that they wrote in English when they did grammar, vocabulary, reading
and listening exercises (Items 1 & 2, Table 2). However, their way of learning this skill tends to be a
common practice in most EFL contexts (Islam et al., 2019; C. T. K. Nguyen, 2019; Nguyen &
Suwannabubpha, 2021; Sun, 2010; Syafii & Miftah, 2020).
Furthermore, although around two-thirds of these students agreed that their teachers taught ELF writing
in class (Items 6 & 7, Table 2), only about half of them admitted that their teachers checked their writing
timely and taught this skill in detail (Items 3 & 4, Table 2). This could explain why a high percentage of
these students expected their teachers to spend more time teaching this skill in class and providing timely
and detailed feedback on their writing (Items 2 & 4, Table 5; Figure 4). As explained by the teachers in
Nguyen (2021), the heavy contents in the new textbooks and the multiple-choice test formats made them
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cut the teaching time of writing short in order to complete the lessons within the allocated time and train
students to do well in the tests. It is true that the mainstream school system in Vietnam has largely relied
on high-stakes testing to measure the effects of teaching and learning (Le, 2019). Accordingly, as
indicated in the provincial DET specifications/framework, the in-class assessment per semester includes
one quiz, three regular 15-minute tests, two periodical 45-minute tests, one mid-term test and one end-ofterm test. For G12 students, besides these tests, they have to take the national tests for their graduation,
and their success was decided by the results of their graduation exams (Nguyen, 2021). Previous scholars
(Imsa-ard, 2021; T. T. L. Nguyen, 2019b; Nguyen, 2020) thus claimed that in the examination-oriented
education system like Thailand and Vietnam, the test-oriented teaching is commonly known to
extensively practice.
In terms of challenges, the majority of these U-SS students agreed that their lack of vocabulary and
grammar knowledge made the learning of EFL writing difficult (Item 1, Table 4). The interviews
disclosed their worries of wrong sentence-structures, misspelling of words and being unable to find the
words to write. Their difficulty on vocabulary and grammar tended to be compounded with having no
ideas to write in English (Figure 3). Furthermore, similar to Chinese, Indonesian and Thai students
(Nguyen, 2021; Nguyen & Suwannabubpha, 2021; Stone, 2017; Sun, 2010), these U-SS Vietnamese
students agreed that the differences in writing styles between Vietnamese and English languages
challenged their learning of EFL writing (Item 2, Table 4). This can be also seen in the disagreement of
more than half of the participants who did not think that EFL writing help them think in English-thinking
ways (Item 5, Table 1). It is true that Vietnamese language follow the circular, indirect and inductive
patterns in thinking and writing (Nguyen, 2009; Nguyen, 2012; Trinh & Nguyen, 2014) while English is
written in a clear and highly-organized order with clear topics and well-supported details. Therefore, it is
challenging if Vietnamese EFL students are unaware of this difference. Moreover, if they are not properly
guided by their teachers, they would find a mismatch when following their Vietnamese discursive
patterns to English writing (Nguyen, 2021; Nguyen, 2012). In addition to these, these learners also noted
that not having an effective way of learning, lack of time and interest in English, insufficient feedback
from teachers made their learning of this skill hard (Figure 3). As shared in the interview, these
Vietnamese U-SS students stated that teacher feedback was necessary for them to know what was right or
how/why their writing was wrong in order for them improve it. Additionally, some even claimed that the
absence of teacher feedback on their writing was a big obstacle to learning this skill because they felt lost
and demotivated. This interview information tends to confirm what Nguyen (2019a) reported to be one of
the factors for the success of teaching writing to Thai students. In fact, teacher’s quick returning of
student writing with feedback was found to engage students in writing because what they wrote was still
fresh in their mind, and on receiving teacher feedback, their knowledge was consolidated in an
uninterrupted manner. Engaging EFL students in learning writing, therefore, requires teachers’ time,
strong commitment and patience.
Due to the challenges caused by insufficient teacher feedback, a large number of these Vietnamese
students expected their teacher to spend more time teaching and correcting their writing in class (Item 2,
Table 5 & Figure 4). Additionally, they required their teachers to have good knowledge of teaching this
skill (Item 1, Table 5). These students’ expectations seems to be contradictory with the findings by
Nguyen (2021) who observed Vietnamese U-SS teachers’ writing classes and reported that they had
sufficient PCK to teach EFL writing, and the ways they provided feedback and corrected students’
writing were effective. As explained by Le (2019) and Nguyen (2020), EFL teachers in Vietnam are
pedagogically efficient because they all were trained in four years on their subject majors at pedagogical
universities before doing the job. In the interview with these students, it was known that their teachers’
frequent assignments on test practice rather than writing about a specific topic made them feel they did
not know how to teach this skill. However, as revealed by the teachers in Nguyen’s (2021), teachers in
Vietnam spent little time teaching writing in class because writing was not tested in the national exams.
Therefore, within three 45-minute periods per week and with various sections to cover in each unit in the
textbooks, they chose to focus more on what was important for their students to do well in the tests. This
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information could partly explain why these students expected to include writing-skill elements in the tests
(Item 5, Table 5). In general, these findings tend to confirm the teaching-to-the-test effects when test
results are considered as the main measures of the effectiveness of teaching and learning in Vietnam
(Imsa-ard, 2021; Le, 2019; Nguyen, 2020).
Besides their expectations on teacher feedback and more time to teach EFL writing in class, some
students also wished their teachers to frequently teach and check their knowledge of grammar and
vocabulary in helping them learn this skill better. A number of them also expected to have interesting
class atmosphere, extra outside-class activities and practical topics for their writing tasks (Figure 4). The
interview with the students showed their belief that the more vocabulary they had and the better they were
at grammar, the better they were as EFL writers. As stated by Matsuda (2019), however, it is not
sufficient for EFL learners when attention is given to the language and its structures. Although these
linguistic elements facilitate EFL learners’ language development, they would not be aware of the
contexts, which enable them to understand and manage the complexity of the language in writing. These
U-SS learners’ misconception about the role of vocabulary and grammar in the success of their EFL
writing could thus result from the traditional teaching methods they received at their elementary and
secondary school levels (Hoang, 2016). This could also be because this skill was not taught at their lower
educational levels where, as guided by the Project, the focus was on listening and speaking (Hoang, 2016;
Nguyen, 2021). Moreover, as revealed in the interview, these students felt bored receiving teachers’
writing samples for most of the writing tasks in the textbooks. Though learning these samples by heart
helped them do in-class assessment tests well, they still did not know how to compose a proper text on
their own. For extra activities and fun writing classes, these students would like their teachers to organize
creative and cooperative writing activities which they could enjoy with their classmates. From the
findings in Nguyen’s (2021), this expectation is unlikely to be fulfilled due to several contextual
constraints, namely; insufficient time to cover all required teaching units, big classes with 40-50 students
of different English levels.
Conclusion
This study attempts to explore 335 Vietnamese U-SS students’ views, learning practices, difficulties
and expectations/suggestions on learning EFL writing. The 5-point Likert-scale survey with 26 items and
an open-ended question under each surveyed aspect and the focus-group interview with 40 students were
employed. The findings showed these Vietnamese learners’ awareness of the significance of this skill for
their future in securing a place at their favorite university, having good jobs and opportunities to study
overseas, and improving other language skills. Their acknowledging of the importance of this skill was
also seen in their responses to the survey items on their feelings when they did not learn this skill at G12.
However, these students’ positive attitudes towards learning this skill were found to be greatly influenced
by their teachers and contextual conditions, which were believed to generate their intrinsic motivation to
achieve the learning goals. Similar to the learning of this skill by other EFL learners (Islam et al., 2019;
Nguyen & Suwannabubpha, 2021; Sun, 2010; Syafii & Miftah, 2020), these Vietnamese students learnt
writing as a means for learning other language skills because they mainly used this skill to do grammar,
vocabulary, reading and listening exercises. Furthermore, although their teachers kept encouraging them
to learn this skill, they did not spend sufficient time teaching it and correcting students’ writing, and they
tended to opt for providing students with writing samples to learn by heart. Though these teaching
practices were accounted by the heavy contents in the textbooks, big classes, students’ different language
abilities, multiple-choice test formats in the in-class assessment tests and the absence of this skill in the
national tests, they are the causes of the challenges these Vietnamese U-SS students faced in learning this
skill. In fact, besides their insufficient knowledge of grammar, vocabulary and ideas, which are similar to
those by the EFL learners in China, Indonesia and Thailand in learning this skill (Nguyen, 2021; Nguyen
& Suwannabubpha, 2021; Stone, 2017; Sun, 2010; Syafii & Miftah, 2020), these Vietnamese students
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added that they did not have an effective way of learning, enough time to study this skill in class and
sufficient feedback from teachers. These contextual challenges were suggested to be solved by teachers’
devotion more time to teaching this skill in class, providing sufficient feedback and creating a more
interesting learning environment in class as well as extra activities outside the class. Although the Project
suggests equal attention given to all language skills at upper-secondary level, this study found that this
skill received little time and attention from the teachers who rigidly followed the provincial DET’s
framework. As test results are the main standard of the effectiveness of teaching and learning in Vietnam
(Le, 2019; Nguyen, 2020), it is therefore necessary for the DET and the Project’s leaders to include the
writing-skill section in all in-class assessment and national tests in order to boost the proper learning and
teaching of this skill at this educational level.
Despite this small-scale study with one group of U-SS students in Vietnam, its results are likely to
provide MOET and the provincial DET some insights for relevant and timely support to teachers and
students for the effectiveness of teaching and learning this skill in Vietnam. In the environment where
large-group and exam-oriented teaching is popular in Vietnam, proper teaching and learning practices on
EFL writing is not yet documented, future research on this topic in other EFL contexts/schools in
Vietnam should also be conducted to provide a comprehensive overview of the topic and have insightful
information regarding how to support EFL students in learning EFL writing successfully. Furthermore,
similar studies on students’ views, challenges and expectations other countries where English is taught as
a foreign language is necessary. This could provide a general picture of EFL students’ common
difficulties and expectations in learning this skill so that effective strategic plans to enhance their writing
ability can be developed.
Acknowledgements
I would like to extend my special thanks to my beloved husband, Ifzal Syed, for his considerable
assistance, insightful comments and in-depth discussion on the findings which made it easy for me to
complete this article.
The Author
Dr. Thi Thuy Loan Nguyen is a teacher trainer at VASS College of Vocational Education, Australia.
She used to be a university lecturer in Thailand and Vietnam for almost a decade each. Her research
interests include teacher education, written corrective feedback, genre analysis, English written discourse,
second language writing instruction and research, academic writing, ESL, ESP, professional writing with
genre-based approach, citations and reporting verbs.
VASS College of Vocational Education
C2/1-13, The Gateway, Broadmeadows, VIC3047, Australia
Mobile: + 61 (0) 478920397
Emails: thuyloancailay@yahoo.com
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Appendix
Focus-group Interview Questions
1. Why do you think ELF writing is important for future jobs, to learn other language skills and
open doors to the outside word?
2. How did your insufficient knowledge of vocabulary and grammar make it difficult for you to
learn EFL writing?
3. How did insufficient feedback from teachers make your learning this skill hard?
4. Why did you expect teachers to frequently teach and check your knowledge of vocabulary and
grammar in learning EFL writing?
5. Why did you expect the national tests to have writing components?
6. What did you expect teachers to do in order to have interesting writing classes?
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