STUDY NOTES EPISODE 5: GLOBAL WARMING

STUDY TIPS

You can make your writing style
more interesting by using referents
and, thereby, avoiding repetition of
nouns, which would make your
writing monotonous.

Remember using referents is an
essential writing skill for IELTS
Writing Task 2.

USING REFERENTS

Referents are words, which refer back to
something that has been mentioned before.
They not only add variety to your writing and
speaking, but also provide cohesion to what
you write or say.

Using referents means you can avoid
repetition, and make your writing more
interesting, easier to read and understand.

Remember, when using pronouns as
referents, it is important to identify clearly to
what the pronoun refers in your sentence,
paragraph or essay. This is to avoid
ambiguity.



Referents - Pronoun Reference

Referents are words, which refer back to something that has been mentioned before.
They not only add variety to your writing and speaking, but also provide cohesion.

When your writing or communication is cohesive, your sentences flow smoothly,
making your writing easier to read and understand. Using cohesive devices, i.e.
referents, is essential as a writing skill for IELTS Writing Task 2.

A number of different referents can be identified:

Pronouns

Pronouns agree in gender (male, female, neuter) and number (singular, plural) with
the noun phrase it refers to.


Personal Pronouns

I, you, he/she, it, we, they, one etc.

singular plural
I
you
male he, one
female she, one
neuter it
we
you

they
them



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Demonstrative Pronouns

this, that, these, those

singular plural
this
that
these
those


Possessive Adjectives

my, your, his, her, their, ones, its, our

noun phrase Possessive Adjective
male female neuter
countable (sg) his her its
uncountable its
countable (pl) their


EXAMPLES

The artist deposited the painting at the National Gallery. It became part of the
gallerys contemporary collection.

The scientists investigated the living organisms in the previous study. They* were
found to be unstable in the solution.

The historian wrote about two of the six presidents. These were remarkable and
courageous people.

The brother of that science student passed his IELTS test.

The girl, who witnessed the accident, returned to her vehicle.

The dog chased its tail around the garden.



* The pronoun (referent) usually refers back to the closest noun.


















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Avoiding repetition in your writing

It is important not to repeat subjects too many times because this would make your
writing monotonous.

Compare these two styles of writing.


POOR STYLE

Environmental pollution is a serious
problem facing our world today.
Environmental pollution is caused by
many different factors, for example
factories discharging dangerous gases
into the air, huge amounts of pesticides
seeping into the soil. Though
government departments have put
measures in place to address the
problem, the effects from
environmental pollution are too far-
reaching.

GOOD STYLE

Environmental pollution** is a
serious problem facing our world
today. It is caused by many different
factors, for example factories
discharging dangerous gases into the
air, huge amounts of pesticides
seeping into the soil. Though
government departments have put
measures in place to address the
problem, effects from it are too far-
reaching.


**At the beginning of a new paragraph, it is important to re-introduce the subject and
not begin with a pronoun.

Also, nouns should not be followed by pronouns.
For example: My teacher, he returned our assignments.

The use of the pronoun he in this sentence is incorrect. This is an example of
duplication (repetition), and is grammatically incorrect.