Industrial Revolution Quick Write
Industrial Revolution Quick Write
Industrial Revolution Quick Write
Use your knowledge about primary sources A-D, to make a claim to answer the central historical question and support it with evidence from the documents.
Do you think that English textile factories were bad for the health of working class families?
After proofing your paragraph, re-write it onto a blank sheet of paper and attach the rubric, face out, with your name on the front!
(Topic Sentence)
TS
CD CD
(commentary)
CM CS
(concluding sentence)
Score
Statement of Purpose/Focus
Claim is clearly stated, focused and strongly maintained
Organization
Conventions
Few, if any, errors are present in usage and sentence formation. Effective and consistent use of punctuation, capitalization, and spelling.
Claim is clear and for the most part maintained, though some loosely related material may be present
Adequate progression of ideas from beginning to end. Adequate introduction and conclusion.
adequate support/evidence for the controlling idea or main idea and includes the use of facts, and details:
The response expresses ideas unevenly, using simplistic language. Frequent errors in usage may obscure meaning. Inconsistent use of punctuation, capitalization,
Uneven progression of ideas from beginning to end. Conclusion and/or introduction are
sources is weakly integrated and includes partial or uneven use of facts and details.
weak.
and spelling
The response provides minimal support/evidence for the controlling idea or main idea and includes little or no use of sources, facts, and details:
The response expression of ideas is vague, lacks clarity, or is confusing. Errors are frequent and severe and meaning is often obscure
Total: 25