Causal Argument Essay Revised
Causal Argument Essay Revised
Causal Argument Essay Revised
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merely by manipulating their placement, rates of obesity in the United States doubled (p.1446).
The food industrys aggressive marketing techniques to sell more of their low-nutrient products
are effective and will make them money, but at what cost? They are refusing to acknowledge the
negative impact they can impose on their consumers. A lot of their marketing techniques come
from misleading health claims. These companies want to give their consumers any kind of reason
to purchase their product, even if that reason is invalid. Faulty research claims and support for
their products often are displayed as one of their many marketing techniques pulling in gullible
consumers into buying their products. Companies take advantage of their consumers all the time
and the consumer is just left in the dark buying their product. Peoples lack of knowledge on
nutrition is one way companies capitalize on consumers ignorance. Consumers often fall for
products that are fat free, low carb, and fruit flavored. All these terms look good in their
eyes but what they actually contain is hidden. Most of the time these fat free and low carb
products are indeed what they say but often times loaded with sugar or calories taking away the
purpose of eating the product to promote a healthier lifestyle. Information like that is not
advertised because these companies sole purpose is to sell their product. With all the misleading
health claims certain individuals can be easily influenced into buying their products. These
products that they are buying to fit their nutritional needs may or may not do the job. If they
never learn how to really spot the products they need to fit their nutritional goals reaching their
desired health can be very difficult and discouraging to them. When consumers buy a product
they expect that product to fulfill a purpose and work properly. When people buy some of these
products they can end up being nothing as it was advertised to be. This eventually leads the
consumers back to not even trying to have a healthy diet because what is supposed to work is not
working for them. Their misleading health claims are making themselves plenty of money but
also ruining peoples lives at the same time.
Another method these companies use in their aggressive marketing tactics is audience
targeting, especially children. Mueller, S., Carlsohn, Mueller, J., Baur, & Mayer, (2016) explains
in his article Overweight and obesity are increasing health problems that are not restricted to
adults only. In the developed countries, the prevalence of childhood overweight and obesity was
7.9% in 1990 and is estimated to be as high as 14.1% in 2020 (pg.1) In order to sell more of
their product they prey on children who are innocent and easily influenced. The food industry
spends a lot of money to advertise their products to young people. These products that are being
advertised are mostly high in calories, sugar, and sodium. Many of the products are energy dense
fast foods, sugary breakfast cereals and all generally nutrient poor foods. This marketing towards
the youth is connected to Americas unhealthy diet and problems with weight today. As
mentioned before they use their misleading healthy claims like a great source of vitamins, and
a great source of fiber continuously failing to inform the consumer on the important facts
about their product like calories and amounts of sugar. Children are easily influenced making
them very vulnerable to the markets aggressive advertising. All thats needed to influence a child
are some cartoon characters and celebrities which will get children thinking they want that food,
regardless of its nutritional value. Sugary cereals are great examples with all the different
mascots advertising as the face of cereal. Flashy and colorful commercials are influencing
Americas children into wanting to eat their foods. These companies take advantage of the fact
that children are innocent and vulnerable to these things and are not ready to be making their
own decisions. With these companies jumping on the fact that Americas children are vulnerable
to their aggressive marketing, American children are beginning their bad habits and cravings
early which can transfer over into adulthood. Being raised and surrounded by all of the
advertising and unhealthy foods can make their unhealthy habits hard to break. According to
Ball, Kovarik and Leidy (2015) According to the most recent National Health and Nutrition
Examination Survey data, almost one third of American young people are overweight or obese.
Approximately 80% of youth who are obese will become overweight and obese adults if left to
their own accord (p. 1). With so much of Americas youth being obese and with such a high rate
of that obesity translating into their adulthood this disease is becoming a real problem. The youth
targeting being done by these advertising companies is not helping when Americas youth is
already having problems with weight management. Overweight and obesity are fast spreading
health problems that are not restricted to adults only.
With their marketing techniques these food industries are making a lot of money. With all
the money they make they spend a lot of it towards marketing even more effectively. They do
things with their money like sponsor major scientists and obtain involvement in major health
organizations to make their companies and product seem even better than they already tried to
portray it. With scientists in their advertising their product seems even more reliable than ever
influencing many more consumers to purchase their product. Actual health organizations fold
into their money and agree to represent these companies convincing consumers even further that
their product is healthy and nutritional. The money they get from the success of their product
goes towards obtaining even more success for their product through even more advertising. With
so much funding because of their misleading products success competing is hard for a company
that actually sells healthy, accurately described products to compete with them. The only
competition they have are other companies similar to them which is not much competition at all.
Their success with their advertising campaigns makes crushing healthy food competition really
easy. This makes them dominate the advertising industry and expand their companies even
further. With the expansions they can afford through their success through their aggressive
marketing techniques they are able to fill a much larger demand. This success makes their
products much more available and convenient for their consumers ultimately leading them to buy
even more.
Some people think that obesity is not that great of a problem. According to Gostin (2014)
The NCD Alliance pushed hard to have obesity characterized as an epidemic, but states
resisted. From the governmental perspective, framing obesity as an epidemic, implying the need
for an emergency response, went too far; (p. 37) Here Gostin (2014) is trying to explain how
obesity is not the epidemic is sought out to be. Obesity is not instantly claiming lives or
delivering gruesome deaths but obesity is a problem. Some people argue that there are many
other important issues to deal with besides obesity like cancer, diabetes, and so on. Obesity is
similar to those diseases, they all effect peoples lives negatively and have some kind of health
associated risk involved. Obesity is not something like the plague and does not need an
emergency response but it is definitely something that needs to be addressed. Sarah Palin a wellknown American politician said this against Michelle Obamas anti-obesity campaign What
[Michelle Obama] is telling us is she cannot trust parents to make decisions for their own
children, for their own families [about] in what we should eat. ... instead of a government
thinking that they need to take over and make decisions for us according to some politician or
politicians wife priorities, just leave us alone, get off our back and allow us as individuals to
exercise our own God-given rights to make our own decisions (Fisher, 2010, para. 2). Obesity is
effecting thousands of lives, rapidly spreading, and hindering Americas health. Those reasons
alone are enough to have obesity addressed and a solution thought of.
With obesity at an all-time high aggressive marketing is definitely the root of obesity.
Advertising has come to a point where advertising is out of control and nothing is being thought
of besides money. Health should be of primary concern when these advertisements are going on
and the consumers should be fully informed not just partially. With companies misleading their
consumers people are becoming even more vulnerable to the disease. As America goes into
further generations it looks as if obesity is only destined to become worst with all the children
that have been exposed to the marketers deceitful ways. If Americas children fall to their tactics
they will become even more vulnerable to the disease as they mature. These companies and their
deceiving tactics have to stop. Aggressive marketing is visibly noticeable as the main culprit. At
what cost is America allowing these companies to thrive?
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