DR Mubina Tallat-2
DR Mubina Tallat-2
DR Mubina Tallat-2
Abstract
In this paper, it has been explained on the basis of results obtained
from an investigation held in Britain, how Pakistani English has
diverged from Standard English, unnoticed by its speakers. The
analysis and discussion are based on a qualitative research method,
but quantitative data has been provided for confirmation of
tentative results obtained from in-depth analysis of a text. The
tentative results of analysis lead to developing an argument about
how it is viewed by the Western reader, and how it should be
regarded by its users as a variety in its own right. It should not
carry any stigma because it is used creatively in the social context
of Pakistan. This context is distinctly bilingual and therefore it
should not be compared to the norms of monolingual use.
1.0 Introduction
There is a great diversity in Pakistani English (PE). It is not any one thing. It has
many sub-varieties in it. It is not possible even to talk about all aspects of any one
given sub-variety. There are too many issues involved and too little research on this
topic. In this paper, then, the sub-variety chosen for study is closest to standard
English (SE) though not exactly like it. The sub-varieties at a greater distance from the
native speakers English are relatively easy to identify. But the sub-varieties close to
SE need to be identified carefully.
In order to do this, only one text has been selected for in-depth analysis. The discussion
starts in the following section 1.1 with a brief note on the selection of text for data and
the procedure of analysis based on qualitative research methodology (Hakim:1987).
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to 70 Pakistani teachers of English along with two other texts. They were shown 3 texts
and asked to select only one which they thought was closest to SE, or farthest from it.
The same procedure was repeated among a group of British English (BE) speakers at
the university of Essex, Colchester. There was no difference in the opinion of these
two groups about which text was closest to (or farthest from) SE. Still, Political Upstarts,
the text thus selected, elicited notably different responses from these two groups. In
order to pinpoint the linguistic categories which sparked off differences of opinion, the
text was re-written partially, by a native speaker of BE on request. This re-written or
amended version of the text was then shown to a number of competent users of
Pakistani English. A controversy then ensued, and this generated a lot of discussion
on the nature of differences in the use of English in this particular text.
It should also be mentioned that the text has been taken from a newspaper. So it
is a piece of public discourse. However, it appeared in a column that invites personal
comments on some social or political problem of the country. In this piece the writer has
expressed his personal views (or better, sentiments) on a political topic. Hence it stands
mid-way between a public discourse and a personal discourse. That the text lies close
to SE on the cline of bilingualism (Kachru:1982) will become obvious from a
comparison with other texts given for this purpose (Appendix-I). It neither shows any
major syntactical deviation of the nature found in Mobs Attack, nor lexical divergences
of the kind found in Rising Prices (Appendix-I). The text was discussed first with
several groups of Pakistani readers and then with native speakers of BE. The analysis
is based on a comparison of their views. The rationale for this kind of approach to
individual text analysis is given below.
Political Upstarts
Some people are always a disgrace to whatever office they hold. And we have
plenty of them amongst us, humph! I wonder what great sin this nation has
committed that it has, more often than not, been made to endure the curse of
mediocrity. Or how else would you explain the plutocracy thrusted upon us by
these political upstarts.
One such would-be gentleman, whose permanent abode is vulgarity, continues
to grow in his office though he refuses to grow in stature. In case you are in a
quandary as to what bird you make of this reference, he is the past, the present,
and the future chief of the Pakistan Mediocrity League. Yes, right you are.
After vulgarizing many ministries he now has a new role. Are not we our own best
enemy? Hazrat Ali was once asked why internal strifes which marked his rule has
not surfaced during the period of his predecessors. It all depends on the quality
of advice one receives from ones companions, pat came the answer.
Strange is the dynamics of our polity which throws up pigmies into the political
arena who then acquire an exaggerated sense of their importance and ability. The
people of this land may be untutored they can still tell a politician from a political
beast. It was a wonderful morning until I read the distasteful elevation of this
person. Oh God, save us from the reign of mediocrity.
The native speakers of BE were flustered by two things in the text:
1. Moral tone
2. Ornamental or frilly flowery English
These remark may appear to be general and non-specific at first. But the rewritten version of the text has helped in making these responses specific. The immediate
reaction of the native speakers of British English (BE) relates to the style features of
the text, reflected in the use of certain words as the following:
humph!
pigmy
abode
Some expressions were simply disliked. For example:
vulgarizing of ministries
would be gentleman
distasteful elevation
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In Urdu too, there is a phrase /jhat pat jawab deyna/ which means to give instant
answer. Often, jhat is removed from the Urdu collocation and we are left with:
pat sey jawab dia
fat sey jawab dia
or
In pat came the answer, both meanings of the word pat are blended through a slight
variation in the word order. For example, it could be:
..came the pat answer. [SE]
Instead it says:
.pat came the answer [PE]
And for Pakistani bilinguals, in this order of words, pat not only means a
spontaneous response but also instantly came the answer. Inventions of this kind
are quite widespread in PE (see Appendix-II).
The SE-Version written with the help of one BE speaker was completely rejected
by the Pakistani informants as a distortion of the original text. The changes made are
highlighted with the help of italics.
Political Upstart
Some people are always a disgrace to whatever office they hold. And we have
plenty of them amongst us, humph! I wonder what great sin this nation has
committed that it has been cursed with being an inferior land. Or how else would
you explain why power is in the hands of the wealthy?
One such person who is extremely rude and offensive, continues to grow in his
office though he refuses to grow in stature. In case you are in a quandary as to
what bird you make of this reference, he is the past, was the present, and will be
the future chief of the Pakistan Mediocrity League. Yes, right you are.
After humiliating many ministries he now has a new role. Are not we our own
best enemy? Hazrat Ali was once asked why internal conflicts which marked his
rule had not surfaced during the period of his predecessors. It all depends on
the quality of advice one receives from ones companions was the reply.
Pakistani politics is such a strange force that it brings in completely bizarre and
odd people who then acquire an exaggerated sense of their importance and ability.
The people of this land may be uneducated they can still tell a politician from a
political beast. It had started off as a wonderful morning until I read the news of
this persons elevation. Dear Lord, save this country from the reign of mediocrity.
(SE version)
The Pakistani informants invariably expressed the opinion that the force of the
piece was considerably reduced by the changes that have been made in this text. It no
longer conveyed the same heard-hitting message as the original text. The changes
made in this text were rejected by the majority of Pakistani informants. The reasons for
rejection are summarized in the following section 1.4.
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language used. They referred to some words, collocations and phrases. But the Pakistani
informants insisted that the response of BE speakers was based on purely cultural
differences and had no genuine linguistic ground. The genuine linguistic response is
grammatical divergence or misuse of words.
Now, the response of each group may have some justification. Since this text has
drawn upon literary vocabulary like abode, quandary, pigmies which the young British
students thought old and the middle aged informants formal, the dependence of PE
on the written sources is clearly indicated in it. But even within the speakers of SE, the
response of the well-read, educated and relatively mature readers varied considerably
from one feature to the other. The older generation (plus forty) did not object so much
to vocabulary (pigmy, abode, quandary) as to certain comments which were not
palatable to their taste (calling upon God, distasteful elevation etc). There were,
however, a few who did express some delight over the use of expressions like lives an
abode of vulgarity and critical remarks like refuses to grow in stature even if continues
to grow in office. This later remark, as pointed out earlier was considered to be, by a
majority of (younger group of) informants, a statement loaded with moral judgement.
Most Western speakers of English associate the use of old words with conservative
values (or social system), which is again a controversial point.
The Pakistani group of informants saw this text as a creative use of English.
When it was pointed out to them that some of its vocabulary was considered to be old,
and morally loaded, many shrugged their shoulders, to brush aside these judgments.
This is understandable too. The Pakistani users are more familiar with old vocabulary
because of their contact with written forms of English (classical literature and legal
English) in the absence of contact with spoken varieties. However, the reason why the
informants thought that the text was creative was on account of the combinations
made out of, say, even old words. So it is not just old words, but the inventiveness of
abode of vulgarity one would-be gentleman of vulgarising of ministries that most
Pakistani informants relished. They appreciated the new combinations and subtle
variations or twists which blended English with subtle shades of meaning from Urdu
(L1). The blending is considered to be a creative feature of the text by Pakistani users.
This is the point where the use of English is apparently entangled in a skein of attitudinal
differences.
It is clear, for example, that:
1)
Pakistani users of English judge their own performance of English against a
norm of English language use which allows them flexibility not only on the
levels of phonology and lexis but also on finer levels of grammar.
2)
Pakistani users of English have demonstrated in practical terms, through
rejection of revised BE text, their half- conscious belief that English in
Pakistan has its own pragmatics since the socio-cultural norms and religiopolitical contexts are different.
So finally the question arises: Is this text an isolated phenomenon or are there
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more like it? If yes, do they help us to identify a sub-variety in Pakistani English? The
texts given in Appendix-II will make it clear that the use of old words in new combinations
is a feature of many Pakistani texts. In the context of Pakistan, it is irrelevant how the
Western readers regard such English. Their views become relevant only for the minority
who may visit Western countries at some later stage in life. It is sufficient to remember
for Pakistani users of English that a variety of texts taken together reveal an underlying
similarity in the habit of use. This is the use of all the available resources of our bi- or
multilingual codes to create new combinations, for successful communication. In the
following section we shall look at the contours of the text that may help us to identify
a sub-variety in PE.
count only when two varieties become mutually unintelligible. It is more important to
speak many languages (even if imperfectly) than to speak one with perfection. There is
a considerable flexibility in the norms of the use of a language - even in writing. For
example, Urdu has had at least four different regions of standardization including Punjab.
The flexibility in our norms we owe not only to multilingual, but also to oral norms
of culture. Here, the word does not enjoy the same sanctity as in the Western tradition
of writing. In our bi-or multilingual context nothing is as important as meaning
because the word will vanish. Besides, meaning does not lie in the word. It lies in the
context and the shared knowledge of the readers and writers. All texts presented in
Appendix-II are written in a style that draws on our familiar habits of bilingual speech.
which permit verbosity, circular arguments and so on (Kachru:1999).
Far more shocking for Pakistani users are judgements of SE speakers resulting, of
course, from a host of socio-cultural factors and summarized in one phrase PE has
moral overtones. For example appeals to God are a big cultural difference. In SE,
such appeals are rare and always invite negative reactions from the readers. Although
most Pakistanis would be surprised to hear it, this forms the basis of a major divide
between the east and the West. The seriousness with which this difference is treated
by native speakers of English is lost upon the speakers of PE. This difference is,
however, deep, abiding and one which sparks off conflicts not immediately resolvable
at all.
Pakistani English has its distinct features then. Its structure, form and functions
represent a diffusion into oral, multilingual norms of expression dictated in some measure
by religious systems of belief that seems to work against abstract values of Western
culture favouring secularization.
APPENDIX. I
Note: Political Upstarts can be compared to the following texts in order to work
out how it compares with other texts in Pakistani English. The following texts belong to
the middle point on a cline of bilingualism. Political Upstarts stands closer to the
Standard English than the following texts.
Rising Prices
There remains a continuous and unchecked upward trend in the price structure of
essential commodities. It has naturally become unbearable for the common man to
make a living in the society. Unfortunately no political party tries to peep into the lives
of people. How a person succeeds in making his both ends meet is at least not the
business of our political parties. On prices, our past and present governments record
is truly dismal; not only did it fail to rein in inflation but, what is much worse, it actually
contributed to a further increase in prices by pushing up the cost of various essential
commodities including petroleum products. This was bound to reflect adversely on the
price level. There does not exist a realistic connection between the wages and the
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market prices. The people as such are encouraged to adopt illegal means to make a
living rather to survive. Utility shops are not sufficient in number to cope up with the
situation. In Turkey a peon gets as much salary as his officer. In Iran there exits a
Khilafat system under which an employee having more children gets more salary. We,
in our country, also need such type of drastic policies. God better knows such time will
ever come in our country and in our life.
Mobs Attack
Sheikhupura Disgusted over police failure to control highway robberies, theft
and burglaries in Farooqabad and adjacent areas, a mob of over 5,000 local people
attacked Farooqabad Police Station and burned all its records to ashes besides damaging
police station premises building on Monday morning.
Upheaval occurred when people read about two dacoities in Sharifpur locality in
the houses of Khudabuksh and Gulam Rasool Qureshi in which armed dacoits had
decamped with cash Rs.3,000 and Rs.5,000 with jewelry worth 40,000, respectively
besides causing death of the latter with a bullet while saving preventing kidnapping
the kidnap of his minor little son. The enraged demonstrators dislodged the gates,
doors and windows of police station and set them on fire. Telephone and communication
set up was disrupted. The demonstrators also smashed the police post at Farooqabad
and destroyed all its belongings furniture/records. Traffic on Sheikhupura-Sargodha
road was blocked by the demonstrators with the help of burning tyres and other hurdles.
The running of trains through Farooqabad was also disrupted. District authorities
reached the spot to bring the situation under control. Police force available there fired
teargas shells and lathi-charged to disperse the demonstrators.
The processionists and demontrators also threw bricks and stones at law enforcing
agencies and ten policemen sustained injuries in the clash. A jeepster of the Ilaqa
Magistrate was also set on fire by the demonstrators. DIG Police, Lahore Range, visited
Farooqabad and reviewed law and order situation.
APPENDIX-II
The following texts are reproduced to show how several texts, written by different
writers on a variety of topics share the same kind of creativity in the use of English.
This proves that Political Upstart is not an isolated phenomenon. It merely represents
a characteristic habit of use of English in a bilingual context. The invented expression
is written in italics.
1.
Lastly, and I know this is low on everyones priority, why inflict more boredom
on the poor people? As it is they are having a rough time at the hands of Aslam
Azhar and his Light Brigade. Why pile another insult on the masses who are
having a hard time making both ends meet?
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2.
Pithily, Music Viewsik, the second album of Fareeha Pervaiz, is yet not successful
in creating any lasting impression like her maiden venture Patang Baz Sajna
among music lovers. And for this seeming failure, she cannot be awarded grace
marks because it is her second attempt.
3.
Safia Bibi is raped and sent to jail for lack of evidence. Every time a woman
complains to the police, the result is a nullified situation. There is reluctance on
the police side, which has a sickening extent. The authorities have an attitude
where they think the more they ignore, the fewer cases will be reported.
4.
What would the father of the nation say to the abusive, bitter and unforgiving
politics of today in Pakistan?........ May be he would be told to keep away from
politics and not meddle in our internal quarrels. One can imagine some fiery
speaker haranguing in Mochi Gate saying to the Quaid, What do you know of
the gut politics and the problem of the people? You go back to Bombay where
you came from.
5.
Problems, thats what is next. The moment the Punjab government goes on air
and I admit that they have enough hot air to do so, theyll be straightaway in
knee-deep trouble. The ruling party will start taking out processions protesting
against the one-sided coverage the PUNJTV is giving to the nation.
6.
Medical students protesting against the injustice meted out to their whitecoated brethren in the Ganga Ram Hospital attempted to bring out a procession.
When this was a lathi-charged, the medicos holed up in the hospital. As they
brick-batted the police, the uniformed men lobbed tear-gas shells into the hospital
compound. The days fight exhausted individual aggression in the absence of
any credible organization to articulate their demands and the whole strike simply
petered out.
7.
Up and up we went through impossibly narrow and steep roads, past olive and
fig trees and bushes laden with all kinds of fruits. The views were breathtaking as
we ascended, but being people of the plains, our hearts were in our mouths more
than once.
8.
Manifestos of the political parties promise so much in exchange for the citizens
vote that one is apt to dream that after November 1988 Pakistan will become a land
of milk and honey where the sheep and the wolf will drink from the same water
hole. Modest and measurable goals are not hard to accomplish provided we
attack the root cause of all our ills, bribery and corruption. After all these cruel
years we must overcome the corrupt among us. Surrender to them this time and
even the wisest amongst us will not have the slightest idea where it will end. Dust
in my mouth for what I am to say, for if we fail now, history will write the obituary.
Here lies Pakistan which perished due to self-inflicted wounds of corruption.
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