Chapter Iiterature Review
Chapter Iiterature Review
Chapter Iiterature Review
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2. Teaching Writing
Writing, while natural talent helps, is primarily a learned art, with
students being taught all the formal and technical aspects and relying primarily
on their own creativity to create. Teaching writing skills can be difficult for
any teacher, since the approach will be different for almost every student.
Some will learn quickly, while others will need some encouragement and more
attention to ensure they understand what they are being taught.
The writing activities should be structured in ways that help students
learn to produce cohesive and coherent discourse on their way to become selfsponsors of their own writings.
a. Process writing activities
1) Pre writing
It is defined as any structural activities oral, written
or experiential -- that influence active student participation in
thinking, talking, writing, and working on the topic under focus
in a writing lesson, stimulating higher-level thinking as well as
writing skills."
Discussing the type of writing to be attempted by students:
(description, narration, exposition, or persuasion)
1. Working on a writing model
2. Analyzing the models organization and style
3. Considering the readers and writers purpose
4. Doing a series of exercises that focus on both
organizational devices and topics appropriate to that
writing function.
Based on Langan (2005:23-35) said there are five prewriting
techniques that will help students think about and develop a topic
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2) Planning
Planning is an orderly procedure that brings about a
desired result or a series of strategies designed to find and
formulate information in writing.
3) Drafting, in this stage you write your ideas in sentences and
paragraphs. Follow your prewriting plan to write a first draft of
your composition.
4) Revising, Langan (2010:33) said that revising is much stage in
the writing process as prewriting, outlining, and doing the first
draft. Its means that rewrite the paper, building on what has
already done, to make it surely. Its seemly like cleaning our
house from the dusty. Based on Langan explain, there are three
stages in revising; revising the content, revising, sentences, and
editing.
As Abisamra said actually revising are writing, reviewing,
rereading, and anticipating what will come next, then
reformulating and adjusting parts of the manuscript as it
evolves.
b. Scoring method
The scoring of authentic assessments should always be defined
before the exercises and assessment procedures are developed. Three
types of rating scales generally used in scoring writing they are
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programs
and
language
arts
objectives.
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Level 1
a.
b.
c.
d.
e.
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I.
Organization;
introduction,
Body, and
conclusion
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Excellent to
Good
Appropriate
title,
effective
introductory
paragraph,
topic is
stated, leads
to body;
transitional
expressions
used;
arrangement
of material
shows plan
(could be
outlined by
reader);
supporting
evidence
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Good to
Adequate
Adequate
title,
introduction,
and
conclusion;
body of essay
is acceptable,
but some
evidence may
be lacking,
some ideas
arent fully
developed;
sequence is
logical but
transitional
expressions
may be
absent or
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14-12
Adequate to
Fair
Mediocre or
scant
introduction
or
conclusion;
problems
with the
order of
ideas in
body; the
generalizatio
ns may not
be fully
supports by
the evidence
given;
problems of
organization
interfere.
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Unacceptabl
e - not
Shaky or
minimally
recognizable
introduction;
organization
can barely be
seen; severe
problems
with ordering
of ideas, lack
of supporting
evidence;
conclusion
weak or
illogical;
inadequate
effort at
organization.
5-1
College
level work
Absence of
introduction
or
conclusion;
no apparent
organization
of body;
severe lack
of supporting
evidence;
writer has
not made any
effort to
organize the
composition
(could not be
outlined by
reader)
given
misused.
generalizatio
n; conclusion
logical and
complete.
II
Logical
development
of ideas:
content
III
Grammar
IV
Punctuation,
spelling, and
mechanics
Style and
quality of
Essay
addresses the
assigned
topic; the
ideas are
concrete and
thoroughly
developed;
no
extraneous
material;
essay reflect
thought
Native- like
fluency in
English
grammar;
correct use
of relative
clause,
prepositions,
modals,
articles, verb
forms, and
tense
sequencing;
no fragments
or run on
sentences
Essay
addresses the
issues but
misses some
points; ides
could be
more fully
developed;
some
extraneous
material is
present
Development
of ideas not
complete or
essay is
somewhat off
the topic;
paragraphs
arent
divided
exactly right
Ideas
incomplete;
essay does
not reflect
careful
thinking or
was
hurriedly
written;
inadequate
effort in area
of content
Essay is
complete,
inadequate
and does not
reflect
college
level work;
no apparent
effort to
consider the
topic
carefully
Ideas are
getting
through to
the reader,
but grammar
problems are
apparent and
have a
negative
effect on
communicati
on; run on
sentences or
fragment
present
Numerous
serious
grammar
problems
interfere with
communicati
on of the
writers
ideas;
grammar
review of
some areas
clearly
needed;
difficult to
read
sentences
Serious
problems
with format
of essay not
legible;
errors in
sentence
punctuation;
unacceptable
to educated
readers
Severe
grammar
problems
interfere
greatly with
the reader
cant
understand
what the
writer was
trying to say;
unintelligible
sentence
structure.
Correct use
of English
writing
conventions;
left and right
margins, all
needed
capitals,
paragraph
indented,
punctuation
and spelling;
very neat
Advanced
proficiency
in English
grammar;
some
grammar
problems
dont
influence
communicati
on, although
the reader is
aware of
them; no
fragments or
run on
sentences
Some
problems
with writing
conventions
or
punctuation;
occasional
spelling
errors; left
margin
correct; paper
is neat and
legible
Precise
vocabulary
Attempts
variety; good
Some
vocabulary
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Uses general
writing
conventions
but has
errors;
spelling
problems
distract
reader;
punctuation
errors
interfere with
ideas
Poor
expression of
Complete
disregard for
English
writing
conventions;
paper
illegible;
obvious
capitals
missing, no
margins,
severe
spelling
problems
In
appropriate
expression
usage use of
parallel
structure;
concise;
register good
vocabulary;
not wordy;
register OK,
style fairly
concise
misused;
lacks
awareness of
register; may
be too wordy
ideas;
problems in
vocabulary;
lacks variety
of structure
use of
vocabulary;
no concept of
register or
sentence
variety
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story until the ending, usually writer improve the content with dialog,
poem or there are some lyric of song, it will increased the scoring. In
this part, good or bad the content based on the writer ability in make
the story. If the writer ever write story or article or other literature it
will help them in writing like this. On the contrary, if the writers never
write as like article, story or other they will have difficulties to make
the story. But if the writer have known what are the story organization,
and they have illustration about it, although never write anything may
they can make the story.
Grammar, descriptive text used past tenses such as, simple
present tense, noun and noun phrase.
c. Strategies for Teaching Writing in Class
As like Abisamra explain about how to teach writing there are
some strategies for it. Learning how to write can be difficult, especially
if try to learn both the rules of writing, writing styles, vocabulary, and
grammar all at the same time. These tips can help you to both teach
writing skills and help your students to learn.
1) Have students write about familiar subjects. Things like
what they did about they pets, her family, or the things they
like.
2) Teach them brainstorming techniques early. This will help
them to develop clear thoughts and stay organized in their
writing.
3) Have students write letters and stories to each other. Note
passing may become a problem, but if you build it into your
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lesson plan, where's the issue. This will show students how
others are writing and bring give those new ideas on how to
develop their writing.
4) Revision is the best way to learn spelling and grammar.
Those who can edit writing can write, and the other way
around.
5) Start to introduce different styles of writing and tones,
giving young writers a more dynamic range they can build
on later.
6) Encourage Reading. This is very important. Students will
gain a more diverse pool of examples they can draw from in
their own writing. Students who read will become students
who write well.
7) Be patient with students. If you become frustrated with
them, they will become discouraged. Some people learn
faster than others, but all students will reformulating and
adjusting parts of the manuscript as it evolves l learn
more from a calm teacher than an angry one.
Writing does not just include one medium. Make sure your
students are familiar with both electronic writing and
handwriting. Even with the advances in computer
technology, handwriting is still a key skill to have.
The most important writing exercises are that students need to
be personally involved in order to make the learning experience of
lasting value. Encouraging student participation in the exercise, while
at the same time refining and expanding writing skill, requires a certain
pragmatic approach. The teacher should be clear on what skill / areas
means of implementation are defined, the teacher can then proceed to
focus on what topic can be employed to ensure student participation.
By pragmatically combing these objectives, the teacher can expect
both enthusiasm and effective learning.
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students
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Technique
to
use
it
from
teacher
(http://www.teachervision.fen.com/group-work/cooperativelearning/48547.html#ixzz1A7C8DJBl)
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vision
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In the "share" step of the strategy, students can share their ideas in
several ways. One way is to have all students stand, and after each student
responds, he or she sits down, as does any student with a similar response.
This continues until everyone is seated. Another way is to move quickly
through the class, having students respond quickly, one after the other, or
to have a class vote. Responses can be recorded on an overhead projector
or on a graphic organizer for future discussions. Another variation is to
stop after the "pair" step, and have students write their ideas. Collect
students' responses and assess any problems in understanding.
Steps in do TPS strategy; decide on how to organize
students into pairs, pose a discussion topic or pose a
question, give students at least 10 seconds to think on
their own. (Think time), ask students to pair with a
partner and share their thinking, call on a few students
to share their ideas with the rest of the class (from
eworkshop).
(http://www.eworkshop.on.ca/edu/pdf/Mod08_think_pa
ir_share.pdf ).
Applications of TPS from Eazhull that explain too about steps of
application in TPS:
(http://www.eazhull.org.uk/nlc/think,_pair,_share.htm)
a. Before a lesson or topic to orient the class (previous
knowledge etc).
b. During teacher modeling or explanation.
c. Any time, to check understanding of material.
d. At the end of a teacher explanation, demonstration
etc, to enable students to cognitively process the
material.
e. To break up a long period of sustained activity.
f. Whenever it is helpful to share ideas.
g. For clarification of instructions, rules of a game,
homework etc.
h. For the beginning of a plenary session.
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skills,
communication
skills,
using
appropriate
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Borobudur Temple
Borobudur is Hindu Budhist temple. It was build in the nineth
century under Sailendra dynasty of ancient Mataram kingdom.
Borobudur is located in Magelang, Central Java, Indonesia.
Borobudur is well-known all over the world. Its construction is
influenced by the Gupta architecture of India. The temple is
constructed on a hill 46 m high and consist of eight step like stone
terrace. The first five terrace are square and surrounded by walls
adorned with Budist sculpture in bas-relief. The upper three are
circular.
Each of them is with a circle of bell shape-stupa. The entire adifice is
crowned by a large stupa at the centre at the centre of the top circle.
The way to the summit extends through some 4.8 km of passage and
starways. The design of borobudur which symbolizes the structure of
universe influences temples at Angkor, Cambodia.
Borobudur temple which is rededicated as an Indonesian monument in
1983 is a valuable treasure for Indonesian people.
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