Chapter Ii
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Chapter Ii
and kinds of sentence, about the author, about the translator, and summary of the
novel.
language text (SLT) into an optimally equivalent target language text (TLT), and
which requires the syntactic, the semantic, and the pragmatic understanding and
analytical processing of the source text. Based on the definition above, the process
Indonesian. Thus in that example, the Source Language is English and the Target
Language is Indonesian.
In addition, translation is a transfer process of some texts from one language into
only focus on the equivalent of formal language such as word by word but also the
equivalent meaning that consists of ideas and messages in the source language.
Thus, the result of translation itself could be understood by readers. In other word,
language. Ordudari (2007) in Widarwati’s research paper 2015 stated the language
that will be translated is called source language (SL), and the text is called the
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source text (ST). The language of translation result is called the target language
(TL); while the final product is called the target text (TT). Based on the definition
of Ordudari, in this research the writer uses several abbreviation. Below is the list
Hurtado Albir (1999: 32) stated that translation method refers to the way a
particular translation process is carried out in terms of the translator’s objective, i.e.,
a global option that affects the whole text. There are several translation methods that
that translation method (global translation strategy) is the overall strategy as if the
the target text in the same purpose as well as the source text .
In addition, the writer states that translation method is the way to translate a text,
or sentence or phrase in certain rules, it depends on the ideas or messages which will
be translated from the source language . It could help the translator to translate a
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Textbook of Translation (1988 p. 45-47), there are eight translation methods in
translating. The eight methods are separated into two classifications: Source
Language (SL) and Target Language (TL) emphasis. Below are the following of
SL emphasis TL emphasis
Word-for-word translation Adaptation
Literal translation Free translation
Faithful translation Idiomatic translation
Semantic translation Communicative translation
Table 2: List of translation methods
(Source: Newmark, 1988, p. 45)
immediately below the SL words. The SL word-order is preserved and the words
translated.
2) Literal translation
The SL constructions are converted to their nearest TL equivalent but the
3) Faithful Translation
A faithful Translation attempts to reproduce the precise contextual meaning
‘transfers’ cultural words and preserves the degree of grammatical and lexical
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4) Semantic Translation
Semantic translation differs from faithful translation only in as far as it must
take more account of the aesthetic value. The distinction between faithful and
semantic translation is that the first is uncompromising and dogmatic, while the
second is more flexible, admits the creative exception 100% fidelity and allows
5) Adaptation
This is the ‘’freest’ form of the translation. It is used mainly for plays
(comedies and poetry; the themes, characters, plots are usually preserved, the SL
culture converted to the TL culture and the text rewritten. The deplorable
established dramatist or poet has produced many poor adaptations, but other
6) Free Translation
Free translation reproduces the matter without the manner, or the content
without the original form . Usually it is a paraphrase much longer than the
not translation at all. The result of translation is often totally different from
Source Language and a paraphrase is longer than the original text. This method
7) Idiomatic translation
Idiomatic translation reproduces the ‘message’ of the original but tends to
do not exist in the original. The translator try to find the meaning of idiom and
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8) Communicative Translation
Communicative translation attempts to render the exact contextual meaning
of the original in such a way that both content and language are readily
Based on the explanation above, the writer states that there are two types of
translation method by Newmark. The methods in the left are methods that emphasis
to the source language they are; word by word, literal, faithful, and semantic
translation. The methods in the right are methods that emphasis to the target
More down the method, it means the translation has better. Because the ‘V’ diagram
was made from up the easiest methods until the bottom is the hardest methods to
use (semantic and communicative translation). In addition if the translators use the
Then, if the translator uses the bottom, it means that the translation result is
good or perhaps it could be great, because in the bottom is difficult to use. In other
word, the method has a lot of factors to encourage the tranlator produces the good
equivalence, in the target language. Meanwhile, there is another expert who states
the translation methods but he called as the degree of translation. He has three the
same kinds with Newmark. The expert is Crystal (1997: 346) in Rokhman 2006
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1) Word for word Translation
Translation of this model, trying to translate text from one language to
are translated into Indonesian words, phrases into phrases, causal clauses, and so
on.
2) Literal Translation
In this model, it translates by seeing only the literal meaning of a word,
phrase, or sentence that is translated. In this way, the structure of source language
3) Free Translation
In this model, attempts to translate the meaning expressed by the source
language into the target language. In this case, the linguistic structure does not
Besides of the translation method by Newmark and Crystal, there also Vinay
and Darbelnet (2000:84-91) in Hanif’s research paper (2017), they have different
translation and the second is indirect or oblique translation. In the direct translation
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a) Direct or Literal Translation
1) Borrowing
Borrowing is the simplest of all translation procedures. We can say that this
task refers to a case where a word or an expression is taken from the source
language and used in the target language, but it in a “naturalized‟ form, that is,
target language, but it can mainly be used as a way to preserve the local color of
the word, or be used out of fear from losing some of the semiotic aspects and
2) Calque
A calque is a special kind of borrowing whereby a language borrows an
expression from another, but then translates literally each of its elements.
Calque, where the source language expression is literally transferred to the target
language.
3) Literal Translation
Literal, or word for word, translation is the direct transfer of a SL text into a
reversible and complete in itself. The translation does not need to make any
change other than the obvious one, like those concerning grammatical concord
or inflectional endings.
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b) Indirect or Oblique Translation
On the other hand, the oblique translation is used when a source language text
1) Transposition
Transposition is a change of sequence of parts of speech with another without
changing the meaning of the message. The change of sequence also can be
followed by the change of word class, the change from singular to plural and
others. This change can occur because the source language and the target
2) Modulation
Modulation is a variation of the form of the message, obtained by a change in
the point of view. This change can be justified when, although a literal, or even
3) Equivalence
Vinay and Dalbernet (2000) used this term to refer to the cases where
who accidentally hits his finger with hammer: if he were a French, his cry of
pain would be transcribed as, aie, but he is an English, and the expression would
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4) Adaptation
Adaptation is use of a recognized equivalent between two situations. In
that conform to the form of language and culture in the TL. In addition, it is used
Darbelnet, there is also translation methods by Molina and Albir (in Rahmawati’s
techniques. Most of the methods are similar with the methods by Newmark, but
they divided more details to distinguish easier how to translate based on the every
factor. Below are the details of techniques which can be implemented to (written)
translation:
1) Adaptation
This technique replaces the cultural element of the source text (ST) with one
of the element in the target language which is similar. The purpose of this
technique is to have the same response of the reader although the literal meaning
2) Amplification
Amplification is the technique of introducing the details that are not
translating from Arabic to add the Muslim month of fasting to the noun Ramadan.
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3) Borrowing
Borrowing technique is implemented by taking a word or expression straight
from another language. It can be pure (without any change), e.g., to use the
English word urine, horizon, diameter, stereo, and neutron in Indonesian text,
or it can be naturalized (to fit the spelling rules in the TT (Target Text), e.g., gol,
4) Calque
It is the literal translation of a foreign word or phrase; it can be lexical or
structural, e.g., the English translation Police Academy for the Indonesian
Akademi Polisi.
5) Compensation
It is to introduce a ST element of information or stylistic effect in another
place in the TT because it cannot be reflected in the same place as in the ST for
instance, the translation of English “Me?” Exclaimed Mrs. Albert Forrester, for
the first time in her life regardless of grammar into Indonesian “Apaan?”
TeriakNy. Albert Forrester, untuk pertama kali dalam hidupnya lupa pada tata
6) Descriptive
This technique replace a term or expression with a description of its form
or/and function in the ST message to make it clear in the target, e.g., to translate
English cow-creamer into Indonesian poci yang berbentuk sapi untuk tempat
susu.
7) Discursive Creation
This technique is implemented by finding a temporary equivalence that is
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8) Established Equivalence
It is the using of a term or expression recognized (by dictionaries or language
expression They are as like as two peas into Mereka sangat mirip in Indonesian.
9) Generalization
It is the using of a more general or neutral term, e.g., to translate English go
expression that have the same meaning in Indonesian, so the translator translated
13) Modulation
It is to change the point of view, focus or cognitive category in relation to
the ST (Source Text); it can belexical or structural, e.g., to translate English you
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14) Particularization
It is the using of a more precise or concrete term, e.g.,to translate window in
15) Reduction
It is to suppress a ST information item in the TT (Target Text), e.g., the
proposal was rejected and repudiated into usulnya ditolak when translating into
Indonesian.
gestures) or vice versa, e.g., to translate the Arab gesture of putting your hand
17) Transposition
It is the change of a grammatical category, e.g., glasses translated into
Indonesian as kacamata.
18) Variation
It is the change of linguistic or paralinguistic elements (intonation, gestures)
indicators for characters when translating for the theater, changes in tone when
Based on the explanation above, from many experts such as Newmark divided
translation method into two classification first, then for each classification he
divided into four methods. Those classifications are formed based on both source
language and target language emphasis. By other expert, Crystal divided into three
methods without classified first, because he divided the three of methods based on
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the translation level, such as from grammatical, second from linguistics structure
and the last from the meaning equivalence. Futhermore, Vinay and Darbelnet
divided into two strategies consists of direct and indirect or oblique translation. In
addition, they divided the direct into three procedures then the indirect or oblique
into four procedures. Then, Molina and Albir divided into 18 techniques. Thus,
from many experts, except Newmark, there are same perspective to Newmark’s
methods.
All of the method by Crystal have same name with Newmark’s, and the
definition also close to Newmarks’ such as word for word, literal, and free
translation. Furthermore, Vinay and Darbelnet have the same perspective with
Newmark’s on two strategies. There are direct and indirect or oblique translation,
eventhough the name is not the same as Newmark’s. Then, they divided the direct
translation into three procedures, and four procedures for the indirect or oblique
translation. From the seventh methods by Vinay and Darbelnet, at least there are
five methods which have same aim with Newmark’s, while Molina and Albir
divided into eighteen techniques. Their methods are more detail than Newmark’s,
but their techniques are seem to be the combination of Newmark’s and Vinay and
Darbelnet theories.
Nida, 1964 (In Venuti, 2000, p.134, in Siboro’s reseach paper, 2016, p.11 )
1) Making sense
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4) Producing a similar response.
paper, 2016, p.11) states some criteria for a good translation as follows:
4) A good translation conveys, some text extent, the library subtitles of the
original.
original text.
Hence, based on several points above, the translator must be convey the
meaning of original text and the translation should be understood. The translation
is influenced by contextual meaning also to produce the appropriate result. Thus the
and a verb and it expresses a complete thought. It is same with Werner and Nelson
(2007:8), but they defined a sentence more complete. They said that a sentence is a
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group of words that expresses a complete idea. Every sentence includes at least one
subject and one verb. The verb may be followed by an object or a complement.
There are four basic types of sentences; statement, question, exclamation, and
a. Statement
b. Question
c. Exclamation
Example:
d. Command
- Be quiet, please!
classified into four kinds. There are simple sentence, compound sentence, complex
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2.5.1 Simple Sentence
A simple sentence has one independent clause. The independent clause
The example above illustrate each sentence containing one clause. The one
to one independent clause to another one of the three ways. The three ways are a
For more details, the following table is a list of coordinating conjunction and their
Relationship Coordinating
Addition And
Contrast But
Result So
Choice Or
Surprise Yet
Reason For
Addition of a negative Nor
Table 3: List of Coordinating Conjunction
(Source: Tuckyta: 2014, p.52)
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The following table is a list of conjunctive adverbs and their relationship according
two or more clauses of unequal importance. Each complex sentence includes at least
one main (independent) clause and one dependent clause. The most important idea
with both a main clause and a dependent clause), the information that the speaker
or writer wants to emphasize is usually placed within the main clause. Thus, that is
the reason why main clause is the most important. A variety of connecting words
may be used to join the clauses. There are three basic types of dependent clauses;
adjective, adverb, and noun clauses. Below there are common connecting words
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1. Connecting words used in Adjective Clauses (Relative Pronouns)
Place Where
Possessive Whose
Time When
Dependent Clause
Main Clause
or not
Opposition
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Manner As, as if, as though
Main Clause
Dependent Clause
Main Clause
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2.5.4 Compound Complex Sentence
Based on Eva Tuckyta (2014) a compound-complex sentence combines the
compound and the complex sentence. It contains at least two independent clauses
novel entitled “The Fault in Our Stars” by Ingrid Dwijani Nimpoeno. The analysis
is only focus on the complex sentences. Futhermore, the writer will categorize the
Indiana, on August 24th 1977. Green had written six novels and several short
stories. The main characters in Green’s novels are mostly teenagers and the stories
are mainly related to romance. Green received many awards for his novels, such as
Michael L. Printz Award, Edgar Allan Poe Award, and Corine Literature Prize.
The New York Times Best Seller list for children’s books listed The Fault in
Our Stars at number one for two weeks in January and February 2012. In 2013,
Green was awarded with Teen Book of the Year award in the annual Children’s
Choice Book Award and won the Innovator’s Award in Los Angeles Times Book
Prize Award. The latest award he received is the Visionary Award from mtv U
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Fandom Awards. (Green’s book The Fault in Our Stars (Author) 2012 in Fahrizy’s
Nimpoeno has translated various books, most of them are major works in fiction
that are originally written in English. Some of the books she translated are Max
Havelaar by Multatuli, Inferno and The Lost Symbol by Dan Brown, The Host by
Stephenie Meyer, The Time Traveler’s Wife by Audrey Niffenegger, several books
old girl who suffers from cancer. In the beginning of the story, she meets Augustus
Waters, a cancer survivor, in a support group. Augustus later admits that he finds
Hazel beautiful and asks her to come to his house to watch a movie. Afterwards,
Augustus and Hazel share their favorite book to each other. Augustus have to read
An Imperial Affliction, Hazel’s favorite book, while Hazel reads The Price of
One day, Augustus done reading the book, then he becomes intrigued by An
Imperial Affliction and decides to contact the author of the book by email. Peter
Van Houten is the author of the book. He create the novel with ambiguous ending.
Augustus manages to start an email correspondence with the author. He and Hazel
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start to send their questions to the reclusive author, but Van Houten says that he can
only answer those questions in person. He invites them to stop by if they are in
Because of her family’s financial situation and the health condition of Hazel,
she can not go to Amsterdam. However, Augustus has a Wish from a foundation
that grants the wishers of kids with cancer. He uses his Wish to take Hazel to
Amsterdam to meet their favorite author. This is where Hazel realizes that she falls
in love to Augustus. However, she believes that she will hurt Augustus when she
dies, so she allows herself to only have a platonic relationship with Augustus.
Augustus finally meet Van Houten, they discover that, instead of a genius, he is a
man of drunk. Van Houten says that he does not really invite them to come to
Amsterdam and refuses to answer their questions.Then, Hazel and Augustus leave
by her boss’s behavior, she invites Hazel and Augustus to visit Anne Frank’s house
where Hazel and Augustus share a romantic kiss. Hazel and Augustus head back to
the hotel and make love for the first and only time.
The following day, Augustus confesses that before they leave home, he goes in
for a PET scan and finds out that his cancer has returned and spread everywhere.
From this point, Augustus’s health deteriorated quickly. Several weeks later,
Augustus died. Hazel is surprised to find Van Houten attend in the Augustu’s
funeral. Van Houten explains that Augustus demands him to come to Augustus
funeral to see Hazel and answer Hazel’s questions about An Imperial Affliction.
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Hazel refuses Van Houten’s answers and tells him to leave her immediately, sober
Several days later, Isaac tells Hazel that Augustus writes something for her,
leave Van Houten’s house. Hazel tries to locate the paper but she comes to a dead
end. A friend of Hazel unintentionally tells Hazel to ask about the pages to Van
Houten, since Augustus spends his final days corresponding to him. When Van
Houten does not reply Hazel’s message, then she tries to communicate with Lidewij
and ask her to find the pages. At the end, Hazel learns that the missing pages contain
Augustus feeling about Hazel and his request to Van Houten to write a eulogy for
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