PPST - RP - Module 20 - Feedback To Improve Learning
PPST - RP - Module 20 - Feedback To Improve Learning
PPST - RP - Module 20 - Feedback To Improve Learning
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constructive feedback to improve learner performance
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5.3.2 Use strategies
for providing timely,
accurate and
constructive feedback
to improve learner
performance
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5.3.2 Use strategies
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accurate and
constructive feedback
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USE STRATEGIES FOR
PROVIDING TIMELY, ACCURATE
AND CONSTRUCTIVE
FEEDBACK TO IMPROVE
LEARNER PERFORMANCE
CONTENTS
ii INTRODUCTION
2 OVERVIEW
3 KEY CONCEPTS
4 SELF-REFLECTION
5 SUPPORT GROUP
- Probing
- Suggestions for Improvement
8 ILLUSTRATIONS OF PRACTICE
- Illustration of Practice No. 1: Oral feedback strategies
- Illustration of Practice No. 2: Written feedback
strategies
- Illustration of Practice No. 3: Deep Feedback
Strategies
- Illustration of Practice No. 4: Peer Feedback
Strategies
- Other Illustrations of practice
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- Bibliography
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Our ultimate goal as teachers is to help our students learn. To achieve this, we need
to provide our students with timely, accurate and constructive feedback so that they
can monitor, evaluate and assess their own learning.
Look at the caricature. What would have been a better way of giving feedback to the
student? As a teacher, how do you give feedback to your students?
In this module, we will provide you with several illustrations of practice highlighting
varied strategies for giving effective feedback to students to improve their
performance.
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KEY CONCEPTS
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SELF-REFLECTION
I have written down my own reflections about this. How about you?
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Now it’s your turn to write down your own personal
reflection regarding your current practice in providing
feedback. Take a few minutes to think about it and write
your reflection in the boxes provided below.
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SUPPORT GROUP
In evaluating their outputs, she writes comments such as: “This can still
be improved,” “The message is vague,” “Please use literary devices.”
She then asks the class to revise their poems and pass them the next
day. When checking the students’ outputs, she is a bit disappointed
because majority failed to write good poems despite her comments.
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Probing
We believe that you have fully understood Teacher
Carol’s situation. Now, please answer the following
questions.
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3 How could Teacher Carol have monitored the performance of the students?
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4 How important is providing timely, accurate and constructive feedback to our students?
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ILLUSTRATIONS OF PRACTICE
Teacher Melanie, a grade 1 Teacher, allows Mark, a Grade I learner to write the
letter M after giving him an oral feedback. Specifically, she points out the better
way of writing letter M on the board. In order for the learner to see the better
way of writing it, Teacher Melanie demonstrates how it is done.
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The oral feedback is significant in this illustration because it closes the gap between the current
and desired performance by informing student behavior (Peer feedback, n.d.).
In this practice, the teacher provides one-on-one oral feedback where a learner’s need is
addressed individually during a task. Oral feedback is sometimes considered less formal, but it can
be a very powerful and effective tool as it can be provided easily in the ‘teachable moment’ and in a
timely way similar in the presented practice.
For feedback as a formative assessment, you need to address these three important questions
(Black & William, 2009)
Question 1: Where the learner is going?
Question 2: Where the learner is right now?
Question 3: How to get there?
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Teacher Lisa: Malapit na ang kahulugang sinabi She guides the whole-class to think
mo. Kung nagtatrabaho siya sa karinderia, ano of the appropriate meaning.
ang kaniyang ginagawa?
HOW TO DO IT
For oral feedback to succeed, whether addressed individually or in whole-class, the teacher should:
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Teacher Bryan, gives feedback to his Grade 4 class’ artworks after he asks them to paint the
sketched landscape using colors appropriate to their cultural community (A4EL-IIf). Using the
rubrics as the evaluative tool, he writes specific comments for each artwork based on the set
criteria.
Then, he conducts conferencing to discuss, clarify and guide the pupil to identify ways on how
the artwork can be improved.
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This practice highlights the use of written feedback after a task. Effective written feedback
provides students with a record of what they are doing well, what needs improvement and
suggested next steps. Students and teacher might use a log to monitor whether and how well
the student has acted on the feedback.
HOW TO DO IT
1. Provide a written feedback that is understandable and actionable for the learner.
2. Include where the student has met the learning intentions and/or success criteria.
3. Tell where the learner still needs to improve.
4. Encourage the learner to think through the answer for themselves.
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Teacher Angeline is Math teacher for tenth graders. She uses deep feedback strategies
so that she can keep track of her learners’ progress after teaching the competency
uses appropriate measures of position and other statistical methods in analyzing and
interpreting research data. M10SP-IVh-j-1.
With the Met, Not Yet Met, I Noticed technique as reflected in the feedback form below,
she has established a system of monitoring each learner’s achievement by putting a
checkmark on the appropriate column.
With this technique, the focus is on aspects of quality or progress within the student’s
work against the criteria that has been set. The teacher provides information that builds
on the student’s strengths, points out an area of concern and gives realistic suggestions
for success.
HOW TO DO IT
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Here are some other deep feedback strategies that you may use in the classroom.
More of, Less of technique. This technique focuses on helping students to see where to
concentrate their efforts and on what specific aspects. Feedback is given in relation to a
particular criteria with 2-3 suggestions for what the students need to do more of or less
of to be successful on the task.
Key questions technique. This technique focuses on giving students suggestions that
build off their strengths and provide specific information to help them to meet their
target goals. Feedback is given in relation to the criteria using the following questions
as prompts: What’s working? What’s not? What’s next? By giving feedback on what is
working, students can build on their strengths, while considering the next steps and what
is not yet working.
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This illustration of practice highlights the use of structured peer feedback which provides
students with the opportunity to give and receive feedback about ongoing work, especially when
the focus is on improvement rather than grading.
Peer feedback involves students giving and receiving information about performance or
understanding in relation to learning intentions and success criteria. Learning intentions
describe what the learners should know and do after an instructional activity while success
criteria determine how well students have met these learning intentions.
Peer feedback enables students see other students’ work which can deepen their understanding
of the lesson. As a strategy, it also encourages collaborative learning and can build and enhance
students’ capacity for judgement. Students become teachers of themselves and each other, and
learn to self-regulate their learning (Peer feedback, n.d.).
HOW TO DO IT
As a Proficient Teacher, peer feedback works best if you:
1. model and role play how to give feedback in a constructive way
2. explicitly teach students how to provide effective feedback to each other
3. hold students accountable for the comments, suggestions and feedback they give one
another
4. use scaffolds like peer feedback forms, which can be checked by the teacher to provide
more structure to peer conferences.
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Here are other techniques related to peer feedback which you may also use:
• Two stars and a wish: This technique works best for those students who are newly-
introduced to peer feedback. Students are paired up and are asked to write two positive
comments (stars) and one constructive comment (wish) about another student’s work.
• Plus, minus, what’s next: This allows students to comment on what was done well (plus), point
out what should be improved (minus) and suggest a strategy for next steps (what’s next).
• Thinking hats: This technique encourages different students to take various roles in providing
feedback depending on the color of the hats they wear. For instance, a blue hat encourages
students to think about good points in their peer’s work, a red hat lets students to think
critically and find weaknesses; and a green hat inspires students to think creatively and find
other strategies to improve the output.
• C3B4ME (See Three Before Me): This technique urged the students to see three peers and
discuss their work before discussing it with their teacher.
Source: (Peer feedback, n.d.)
LEVELS OF FEEDBACK
As a Proficient Teacher, as we give feedback we should
consider the different levels at which our feedback is
directed, in order of least to greatest impact (Hattie &
Timperley, 2007).
WHAT IS IT?
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SAMPLE PRACTICE
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feedback.
Effective feedback:
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6. provides opportunities to close the gap between current and desired performance;
Feedback is most useful when students have an opportunity to improve work by being able to
resubmit the work or receiving feedback during the production process (e.g. comments on drafts)
or apply the feedback to a subsequent piece of work. Also, students can benefit from being given
help to develop strategies to use feedback.
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Please bear in mind that feedback may be formative or
evaluative. Formative feedback is diagnostic in nature
and is intended to help the students revise and improve
their work. On the other hand, summative feedback
is a final analysis of students’ output or performance
on which final grades are based (The importance of
feedback to students, n.d.).
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Summative feedback An elementary teacher uses letter grades to evaluate her pupils’
themes in Filipino.
Descriptive Feedback In a junior high school, a Math teacher uses specific information in
the form of written comments for the students who failed to solve
the equations accurately.
Non-verbal cues as feedback A junior high school teacher uses facial expressions and voice tone
to signal her agreement or disagreement with students’ responses.
Online feedback After encouraging the students to write travelogues in their blogs, a
teacher writes his feedback through comments.
Other experts’ feedback A Senior High School Cookery teacher invited restaurant chefs as
evaluators during the food festival the students have prepared. The
chefs are then encouraged to present their feedback during the
program.
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PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT PLAN
After you have explored the different key concepts and illustrations
of practice for providing feedback to students, you now have a better
appreciation of this indicator. Based on your learning in this module,
think of what you can do to strengthen it.
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RESOURCE LIBRARY
Bibliography
This section provides you resources with annotations that can help
you further understand the indicator.
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Black, P., & William, D. (2009). Developing the theory of formative assessment. Retrieved from
https://kclpure.kcl.ac.uk/portal/files/9119063/Black2009_Developing_the_theory_of_
formative_assessment.pdf
The writers explain the formative assessment within the broader theories of pedagogy.
Descriptive feedback and some strategies. (n. d.). Retrieved from Standards Toolkit website
http://standardstoolkit.k12.hi.us/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/CCR.Protocol_1.
Descriptive_Feedback_Strategies.pdf
This offers teaching strategies that foster deep feedback to students.
Effective feedback. (n.d.). Retrieved from Education Standards Authority website https://
educationstandards.nsw.edu.au/wps/portal/nesa/k-10/understanding-the-curriculum/
assessment/effective-feedback
Hattie, J., & Timperley, H. (2007). The power of feedback. Review of Educational Research, 77(1),
81-112. https://doi.org/10.3102/003465430298487
The writers present the conceptual analysis of feedback and reviews the evidence related
to its impact to learning and achievement.
Learning intentions and success criteria. (n. d.). Retrieved from Australian Institute for
Teaching and School Leadership Limited website https://www.aitsl.edu.au/docs/
default-source/feedback/aitsl-learning-intentions-and-success-criteria-strategy.
pdf?sfvrsn=382dec3c_2
This online resource tells the importance of learning intentions and success criteria in
giving feedback to students.
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Nicol, D. J., & Macfarlane Dick, D. (2006). Formative assessment and self‐regulated learning:
A model and seven principles of good feedback practice. Studies in Higher Education,
31(2), 199-218. https://doi.org/10.1080/03075070600572090
The writers offer good feedback practices in the context of self-regulated learning.
Peer feedback. (n.d.). Retrieved from Australian Institute for Teaching and School Leadership
Limited website https://www.aitsl.edu.au/docs/default-source/feedback/aitsl-peer-
feedback-stratedy.pdf?sfvrsn=372dec3c_2
This online resource describes peer feedback as an effective strategy to support
student learning.
Philippine Professional Standards for Teachers. (2017). Pasig City: Department of Education.
Retrieved from http://www.deped.gov.ph/wp-content/uploads/2017/08/DO_
s2017_042-1.pdf
This defines teacher quality in the Philippines. It uses standards that describe the
expectations of teachers’ increasing level of knowledge, practice and professional
engagement.
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ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
PROJECT TEAM WRITER-COORDINATORS Christopher A. Cantos
Carmina L. Patriarca
Philip Jay N. Alcoberes, Ph.D. Jennifer E. Lopez Ma. Julieta San Jose
Senior Program Manager and Project OIC Director III Nancy D. Landicho
Leader Bureau of Human Resources and Merlinda C. Dominguez
Organizational Development Vilma S. Fernando
Christine Reading, Ph.D. Joyce Karen D. Dulnuan
Senior Research Fellow Maria Concepcion Beltran - Montenegro Isabel U. Bongtiwon
UNE-SiMERR Faculty, Ateneo de Manila University Miltrudes A. Dango
Delia A. Macalalad
Jan Albert G. Suing WRITERS Leonora C. Rubio
Research Officer Alfred James A. Ellar, Ph.D. Imee P. Aldea
PNU-RCTQ Annie Michelle F. Laurzano Ronald C. Dumapias
Arcangel Q. Bañez Jr. Jose Ariel S. Padsoyan
Rejelyn L. Vega Domingo R. Cueto Ronald C. Lontoc
Research Officer Gregorio T. Mueco Merlyn Conchita O. De Guzman
PNU-RCTQ Hermes P. Vargas
John Paul O. Dela Rosa EDITOR
May Grace D. Salazar Leonore L. Mingo, Ph.D.
PNU-RCTQ and UNE-SiMERR National Ma. Regaele A. Olarte
Research Centre Ryan G. Dela Torre GRAPHICS & LAYOUT ARTIST
Shiela Nina L. Rea-Santes Raymond S. Bermudez
Gina O. Gonong, Ph.D. Vilma A. Buhay
Director, PNU-RCTQ
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Vivian Buhain, Ed.D. Special Thanks
Allan S. Reyes. Ph.D. Leonardo Munalim, Ph.D.
Senior Program Manager, PNU-RCTQ Amparo M. Muñoz, Ed.D. AUSTRALIAN EMBASSY
Mary Ann P. Malipe
John Pegg, Ph.D. Jacinto S. Bose Francesca Lawe-Davies
Director, UNE-SiMERR Karen Clarissa L. Perez First Secretary-Education
Francis G. Baltazar
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Pamela L. Lamparas Gemma S. Santiago Principals who supported the
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