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1. Health benefits of living in cities/countryside


It would be argued by some that it is easier to have healthy lifestyles in the
countryside. However, others believe that there are health benefits to living in the
cities. Both of these attitudes will be discussed in this essay in addition.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some believe that there are health
benefits to living in the cities. To begin with, people have advanced healthcare
systems leading to a faster treatment and also modern machines help doctors to
diagnose a disease more accurately. Hence, cities provide health advantages.
Moreover, It is better for people to live in urban areas because urban areas offer
more convenient public transportation systems. For example, in Hanoi city have Cat
Linh - Ha Dong railway lines, and people have only a few forms of public
transportation operating.Because most modern cities in the world have well-
developed public transportation networks, most city residents spend less time
commuting to other places such as their workplace and schools. Therefore, it is more
ideal to live in cities because they have better public transportation.
On the other hand, although living in cities has many advantages, but some citizens
like to live in the countryside. Firstly, the air quality there is much clearer than in
cities due to less number of motor vehicles people use. It helps them to breathe more
purified air leading to a healthy lung. Secondly, rural living offers the opportunity
to eat fresh, organic foods grown in your area. While city living allows you to grab
a bite whenever you want, the food isn't always the best quality. For instance, urban
people who often eat fast food, however, Fast food and food that has been
transported for long distances are naturally going to be less nutritious than locally
sourced foods. At the same time, Individuals in rural areas are more likely to cook
their own meals and experience the health benefits of a good diet.
To conclude, both the viewpoints are discussed but personally I believe that people
living in the countryside lead a healthy lifestyle as individuals residing in the cities.
2. Academic qualifications or life experience in employment, which is more
important?
Nowadays, some people say that academic qualifications are more important than
life experience when looking for employment. However, some opinions are the
opposite. In my view, I choose the second opinion.
To begin start, there is a wide experience at work that is more important than
having a formal academic qualification, because there are numerous advantages.
First, it does not need a lot of training to cope with the job. Second, they already
have a wide background, which they can apply to their next job. For instance, a
newly hired manager knows how to manage the employees because of her
experience.
On the other hand, a positive attitude or personal qualities like hard working,
diligent and cooperative are more likely to be considered too when it comes to job.
Even though, they are not highly intellectual, but acquiring these desirable
qualities it helps the company to become successful and strong. These attitudes can
build a trust to the customers and to the organization, which it will lead to a
successful work. For exemple, a dedicated worker promoted well due to his hard
work despite the fact the fact that he is not highly intelligent like others.
In conclusion, although a formal academic qualification is essential for the
progress of a company, however, I believe that acquiring a desirable quality and
life experience are considered to be a priority when it comes to a work.
3. Benefits of International tourism
Today, International travel is becoming a development in the world. they play an
important role in economic growth, employment, and social development. The
following essay will present the advantages of International Tourism.
To begin start, there are many benefits that tourism brings. The first and foremost
and irrefutable one is the spike in the economy of many countries due to
international travel. when a country attracts millions of tourists, they bring in
money. This is probably the main advantage of tourism and the reason why it has
been promoted so extensively, especially in developing countries. The income
generated can make up a significant proportion of both private, local, and national
incomes. For example, In 2016, Vietnam welcomed 10 million international
visitors and tourism contributed 6.6 percent to the GDP in the country.
On the other hand, global tourism also creates more job opportunities for local
people. Hotels, bars, transport, activities, shops, and restaurants all need staffing.
Tourism can provide much-needed employment for people. for instance, When
people travel abroad, they want to visit places of natural beauty or historic
significance. This creates new job opportunities like tour planners and operators,
site visit guides, and travel consultants.
To sum up, international tourism not only contributes to the financial prosperity
of communities around the globe but also may be a game changer regarding the
way populations interact with each other.
4. Average life expectancy increased (problem & solution)
Many developed countries are experiencing substantial increases in life
expectancy. This essay will highlight some of the main problems of this and
suggest several possible approaches to reduce the adverse effects resulting from an
aging population.
To begin start, One of the major challenges of the growing population of elderly
people is that it puts a heavy burden on the healthcare system. Older people are
more vulnerable to chronic diseases, such as heart attacks or diabetes, that require
special medical treatments to be effectively treated. The government might have to
devote a larger budget to healthcare in order to serve the growing demands of an
ageing population. Another problem facing a country with increasing life
expectancy is that there will be an increase in the proportion of retired people
claiming pension benefits, and a decline in the percentage of people of working
age who pay income taxes. The combination of higher pension spending and lower
tax revenues can seriously affect government spending and the economy as a
whole.

On the other hand, the government could implement a range of measures to deal
with the problems of increasing life expectancy. The first solution would be to
increase the importance of the private sector in providing healthcare and pensions.
This would help reduce the burden on government spending. Another measure
would be to encourage the immigration of young working adults, which could help
increase tax revenues for the government. Finally, it is important to educate people
about the importance of money management and saving for retirement. By doing
this, when people reach their retirement age, they will have a certain amount of
money to take care of themselves without the need to depend on their children or
the government.
In conclusion, various steps could be taken to tackle the problems that a country
with an ageing population might encounter.
6. Education & healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the
government?
Education and health care are two essential aspects of every human life. Considering
its significance, some people express their opinion that the government should be
free of charge and funded. This essay will be present the view of this.
On one hand, education, nowadays, plays a vital role in the development of a society.
Not only it creates job opportunities, but also help people become aware of the
socioeconomic issues of the country. Making education free till the age of 18 would
encourage the pupils to finish at least their secondary education. For instance, the
percentage of student enrollment in schools in 2011 in Australia increased by 19%
than that of 2009, and it was because the government exempted fees for students in
these classes.
Moreover, the healthcare system can also be improved by providing either health
insurance or schemes that cover a minimum of 50 percent of the cost. Thus people
would not feel that healthcare is expensive while the government would not need to
bear the expenses alone. A healthier nation can help the country achieve greater
heights as citizens in such countries are more productive. Consequently, economic
growths will get bolstered and the government would be able to become self-reliant.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that governments should bear the primary
responsibility for financing education and healthcare services.
7. High use of computer games by children and young people (problem &
solution)
Nowadays, a number of doctors and specialists claim that the high use of computer
games is on the raise in this era, leading to many mental and physical problems for
young people,especially , children. this is a noticeable concern for new
generations. This essay will examine the problems which may arise using
computer games and some possible solutions.
To begin start, there are some problems of using computer games by the younger.
First, youngster tend to spend too many hours sitting in front of computers screens,
and this sedentary life style result in many worrying health drawbacks in children,
with obesity being one of the significant problems stemming from this inadequate
life style. Visual impairment is other problem that arises from playing computer
games a lot. These mentioned problems are just physical drawbacks due to using
digital gaming. There are also many mental difficulties that arise in children from
the utilization of computers. for instance, loss of social contact, using computer
lead to children becoming isolated and they do not want participate in family
gathering.
on the other hand, One of the effective ways to resolve this difficulty set up strict
regulations for children for regarding use of computer games. If companies
establish time limits for game usage, the problem could be resolved. For example,
if children exceed a specific time limit set by company, they cannot continue
playing the game. These laws would reduce the time spent playing game.
In conclusion, the problems that computer games create like loss of vision ability,
obesity, staying away from other hobbies and becoming unsocialized with parents'
help can easily be eliminated.
8. Gap Year, Yes/ No
Nowadays, Some people tend to take a year off from school or work after a period
of studying and working to rest or plan for themselves. I completely agree with the
idea above. In the following essay, I will discuss this idea further.
To begin with, Many people become more successful when they decide to take a
year off because at that time they spend time scheduled for themselves and it also
will help learners identify their passion. It is often said that one classroom is
merely suitable for 30% of students, therefore, the others have to cultivate their
skills by witnessing in real life through deferring the enrolment in the tertiary
schooling. It is interesting to note that while working or travelling, students could
comprehend more about their personalities, thereby not making ignorant career
choices.
In addition, a gap year will push you out of your comfort zone and daily activities,
creating many different relationships. Whether it's through cultural immersion in
another country or volunteering locally, meeting a variety of people will help you
hone your communication skills, broaden your worldview, and gain a better
understanding about myself.
In summary, I would concede that despite that, taking a year gap helps people in a
much better way. Overall, I am convinced that people should take a gap before
starting their journies a new thing or at a university
9. Modern communication technolog: negative effects on social relationships?
A few individuals believe that advancement in technology has some negative
effects on social relationships. I completely disagree with this viewpoint. This
essay will further discuss the viewpoints.
On the one hand, nowadays, technological communication platforms has changed
the way we communicate with others. Thanks to applications such as Zoom,
Google Meet, Discord, Skype, individuals can stay in touch with their beloved
ones anytime and anywhere. Furthermore, companies may also host online
meetings, despite the geographical barriers between the participants. For example,
during the pandemic of Covid 19, various businesses chose to work and
communicate via digital softwares. Surprisingly, while the workload stays
constant, employees shared that they felt more comfortable and productive
working from their homes than in offices. Hence, telecommunication has
outstanding advantages.
On the other hand, they not only a large support for education but also help people
with time and cost savings. Technology enables instant communication,
eliminating the need for time-consuming physical meetings or written
correspondence. Email, messaging apps, and video conferencing facilitate quick
and efficient communication, regardless of geographic location.
For the reasons mentioned above, with rapid development of the modern
commutation technology industry, I believe that it will help people easily connect
with all humans in the global.

10. Young people should leave home when they become older?
In today's modern society, some people think that it is best to encourage humans,
especially childrent to leave their family home as soon as possible. Others believe
children should stay at the family home for as long as they like. In my opinion, I
consider that leaving family home early has many advantages for people.
On the one hand, settling down in a new place creates many opportunities for all
people, especially adults when they are mature enough. Parents encourage their
children to develop themselves by getting out of this zone because a home is one
of the biggest barriers. For example, an older man will look for a better job with
higher salary and can be financially independent if he leaves home. Also, Living
independently will teach children a lot by presenting some difficulties, which
consequently will add some more experience that may prove essential in their
future lives.
On the other hand, some parents agree that their children should stay at home to
increase family bonding, while others spend time outside, leading to an emotional
rift. Moreover, saving on the cost of living is a good option. It can be the case that,
by living with their parents, they do not have to worry about money for things such
as food, clothes, and accommodation. For example, a girl who is not a resident in
her house and has to pay money to rent a dormitory.
In conclusion, while parents often encourage their children to live under one roof
due to various advantages, I believe it is essential for parents to encourage their
children to step out of their comfort zone.

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