CNF MELC7 FINAL Field-Validated
CNF MELC7 FINAL Field-Validated
CNF MELC7 FINAL Field-Validated
Creative Nonfiction
Quarter 2 – Module 7:
Presenting a
Commentary/Critique
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BEGIN
TARGETS
Activity 1
NONFICTIONAL TEXTS CAPTURED
Directions: Identify what is being described in each sentence. Choose your
answer from the types of nonfictional texts. Write your answers in your
activity notebook.
travelogue literary journalism autobiography
blog biography testimonio interview story
reflective essay character sketch descriptive essay
diary journal profile memoir
1. The writer constructs a true story about a time or period in his/her life, one that
had significant personal meaning and a universal truth. The writer composes the
story using the first person “I.”
2. It is short for web log which refers to an online diary that looks like a web page.
3. It is an old canon of Literature, dealing with nature writing, adventure writing,
exploration writing, guide books etc.
4. The writer composes his/her life story, from birth to the present, using the first
person “I.”
5. It uses technique of journalism (such as interviews and reviews) in order to look
outside of the straight forward, objective world that journalism creates.
6. It is an emerging form of creative nonfiction which refers to published oral or
written “first-hand accounts” which the witnesses wrote themselves, or dictated to
a transcriber.
7. It is an analytical practice of describing a real or imaginary scene, thoughts and
adding a personal reflection.
8. It gives a description about a particular topic, or describes the traits and
characteristics of something or a person.
9. It is a detailed description or account of a person’s life.
10. Like a pen-and-ink drawing, it acts as a cameo or miniature life story.
11. It is a kind of biographical narrative which focuses on a particular facet of the
featured person’s life as well as requires research and couple of interviews.
12. It is a quotidian or day to day record of the specific events that have transpired
in the life of its author and is ideally kept on a daily basis.
Activity 2
BRING BACK THE PAST
Directions: Column A contains statements which are related to writing a critique. Find
the terms referred or defined by these statements in Column B. Just write
the CAPITAL LETTER of your choice in your activity notebook.
A B
ACTIVITY 3
DIGGING A CRITIC’S BURROW
Directions: Read the article to be reviewed. Complete the details in the table that follow.
Write your answers in your activity notebook.
LEAVE THE KNOB CLOSE
By Julieto T. Montenegro, Jr.
No one has ever dared turn the knob open. Every family exactly knows what lies
beyond every door. For Nay Consoling and her family, their home is a safe place. They know
that once they break it open, they might have invited in carelessness and haste an
unforeseen stranger which may take their lives away.
For the last couple of months, the world remains in pursuit operation while the culprit
has continuously robbed many lives and left the rest of the living both restless and scared.
They shut their houses down for safety while the profile of the killer has been tracked down.
The killer is in the guise of a novel strain of corona-virus known as COVID-19 which
was first detected in December 2019 in Wuhan, China after an outbreak of pneumonia
without an obvious cause. Now the killer virus has shaken more than 200 territories across
the globe and was characterized as pandemic by the World Health Organization (WHO) in
March 2020.
Stranger it is. Even today, it is unclear where the virus has come from. It was only
understood to have originated in a food market in Wuhan and subsequently spread from
animal to human. Some research has claimed that the cross-species transmission may be
between snakes and human; however, even this claim has been refuted.
COVID-19 is found to be contagious. Increasing number of confirmed diagnoses,
including health care professionals, has indicated that person-to-person spread of the virus
is occurring. It is spread by respiratory droplets produced by infected persons when they
sneeze or cough.
As the virus strikes at the respiratory tract, common presenting symptoms include
fever and dry cough with some patients having sore throat, nasal congestion, malaise,
headache and myalgia or even breathing difficulty. In severe cases, COVID-19 can cause
pneumonia, severe acute respiratory syndrome, kidney failure and death.
While there is no reported vaccine yet to cure the infected, Nay Consoling takes
control of the matter in the family to avoid the spread of the virus and keep her family safe
from infection. The family starts a culture of washing their hands from time to time, coughing
into their elbows, and avoiding touching their faces, wearing of mask and observing social
distancing when going out.
But for the old matriarch, she better wants the family members to stay at home if
there is nothing much important to attend to outside, protect themselves from the strange
virus, and just leave as much as possible their doorknob close.
Topic
General Idea
Supporting Points
Target Output
Audience
Tone/Formality
EXPLORE
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Amazing! You just have
accomplished the tasks with so much vigor.
Now, let’s explore more of the lesson by
answering the following questions. Write
your answers in your activity notebook.
WHAT IS A CRITIQUE?
A critique is a short paper, usually about one book or article. First, it gives a short
summary of what has been said in the article. Then, it looks at the article critically. In
presenting the critical comments, one has to look into the strengths and weaknesses of
the article. A critique can be positive or negative. However, it is better that the critique
points out to improving the article.
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minah chugtai, “How to Write a Critique - Lecture Notes 7,” StuDocu, 2016,
https://www.studocu.com/row/document/comsats-university-islamabad/communication-skills/lecture-notes/how-
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5. Conclusion. This includes your general take/comment on the article. This could be
the summary of your impressions on the technical and creative sides of the piece.
Finally, like any other essay of the author, this piece is a description of a
moment in a vivid detail with some scene left hanging for the readers to
think about and for him to visually experience. But for Fennelly, I am
quite certain that her painful experience of a blizzard – of her father -
creates memories she has lived to survive and share.
Creative nonfictional texts can be categorized into five broad categories namely (1)
biographical narratives, (2) autobiographical narratives, (3) personal or informal essays,
(4) special types, and (5) emerging new forms.
Biographical narratives include biography, profile, character sketch, and interview
story.
Autobiographical narratives include autobiography, memoir, diary, and journals.
Personal or informal essays can be descriptive or reflective in form.
Special types include travel writing, food writing, and nature writing. Travelogue can
be used to describe all these three forms.
Emerging new forms include testimonio, blog, and Facebook Status Report.
A critique is a short summary of what has been said in the article which includes
the discussion of the strengths and weaknesses of the article.as well as points out how to
improve the article.
In writing an article critique, one must observe the following steps namely: (1)
Read the whole book or article thoroughly and highlight text that you think important or
make notes as you go along; (2) think carefully about what you have read and ask
yourself questions about the article; (3) re-read material to make sure that you have
understood the author’s ideas; (4) try to summarize what you have read; and (5)Think
about different points of view
The critique can be written in five paragraphs: (1) introduction which presents the
general ideas/points in the article , (2) presentation of strengths and weaknesses n terms
of content, arguments, evidences, and writing style, (3) commentary on how you relate to
the article, (4) literariness or the quality of the article to be considered as creative work,
and (5) conclusion or the summary of your impressions on the technical and creative sides
of the piece.
REFLECT
Activity 5
TEMPERATURE CHECK
Directions: Accomplish the infographic. Write your answers in your CNF notebook.
How are you doing so far?
Things I still do
Commentary -an analysis of the given passage, its function and its characteristics.
It should examine the key themes and stylistic devices of the
passage, showing how the language works to convey (or at times
undermine) its content.
Literariness - is the organization of language which through special linguistic and
formal properties distinguishes literary texts from non-literary texts.
The defining features of a literary work do not reside in extra-literary
conditions such as history or sociocultural phenomena under which
a literary text might have been created but in the form of the
language that is used. It is the feature that makes a given work a
literary work.
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