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Lesson 1:
General capabilities:
The ability to articulately communicate
a message, whether that be in a profes-
sional or unprofessional setting. !
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The ability to participate in group dis-
cussions.!
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The ability to synthesise a wide variety
of ideas (presented in the group discus-
sion) and use them to inform writing
(the worksheet).
How the quality teaching elements you have identified are achieved within the les-
son.
Teaching Indicators of presence in the lesson
element
1.1 Deep After the first 20 minutes, the entire lesson consistently focusses on the
knowledge. process of:!
- Deciding on a message.
- Planning that message.
- Articulating that message effectively.
At no point in time does the lesson stray from this concept, it is a sustained
focus.
2.1 Explicit When I ask them to break into groups, I tell them exactly what I want to hear
quality cri- from them when they are finished:
teria.
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“I want to hear one example from each group, I need:!
- The message they were trying to convey
- The thought process or planning that went into deciding how to convey that
message
- Did it work? Why/why not.”
They know that they will be called on to provide an example, and exactly what
that example must consist of.
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These comments show that I believe the students are highly capable, and
therefore I expect high levels of work from them.!
Student:
Other considerations
Complete the table blow by inserting the AISTL graduate standards that you are
demonstrating and indicates the evidence from this lesson that should comply with
the standard.
Graduate Evidence within this lesson
Standards
1.5 The worksheets I have created have three options, varying in level of diffi-
culty and method of expression. Worksheet 1 allows students to focus on
general structure and coherence of their writing without taking into consid-
eration the context - they can use unprofessional language so long as it
makes sense. Worksheet 2 forces the student to use language that is appro-
priate for a specific context as well as having to ensure their writing is
clear and coherent. While worksheet 3 allows students to express their
ideas visually (if they are not confident/capable writers) and simply explain
why they did what they did in relation to their visual design. This allows
them to focus on coherency and structure without feeling out of their
depth.
2.2 The students watch a film before listening to me talk about general con-
cepts. They then discuss these general concepts with each other and listen
to students outside of their group discuss these concepts before being given
the opportunity to synthesise these ideas and write about them.!
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They are given the information in a wide variety of contexts to maximise
their chances of understanding the concept, and are then asked to display
their understanding.
3.1 This is similar to “1.5” - I have given worksheets that have the capacity to
challenge all students regardless of ability, while also making sure there is
enough variance to allow students of varying abilities and characteristics to
succeed.!
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They can write while focussing on structure and coherence, they can
choose to add the layer of professional context on top of that, or they can
express themselves visually (artistically) and explain why they did what
they did, allowing them to focus on the basics.
4.2 Classroom activities have been organised (worksheets designed), and in-
structions are very clear both through my verbalisation and through written
instructions on the worksheets.
2.3 I have referred to the curriculum and syllabus while constructing this lesson
plan to ensure that I have met the required learning outcomes.
WHS
What are the key risk issues that may appear for and need to be reduced/eliminated in
this lesson? Using your syllabus and support documents as well as other WHS policy- Out-
line the key WHS considerations that are to be applied in this lesson?
- I must not engage in any discriminatory conduct.
- I must ensure walkways are clear to reduce risk of falling and/or injury.
- I will personally handle all tasks involving electric leads in order to min-
imise unnecessary risk to students.
New South Wales Government. (2011). Work health and safety act 2011 no
10. Retrieved from:https://www.legislation.nsw.gov.au/#/view/act/
2011/10/part6
Resources Attached:
Worksheet 1:
1. Imagine you are any one of the characters seen in the film thus far, write a letter
home to friends and family. This letter can be about anything you like. You could
be telling them about how exciting the mission is, or you could be complaining
that they don’t have twisties in space. !
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You should make sure to:!
- Write in a way that is easy to follow: one point should naturally flow into the
next.!
- Make sure your grammar and spelling is correct.
A) Describe your main point in 1 sentence, this will be the primary focus of your letter.!
eg. “I am upset that there are no twisties on the space station”
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B) Using dot points, make a plan for how you are going to articulate this, for example:!
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- Twisties greatly increase my quality of life.
- If I stay on this planet I will have a low quality of life due to the lack of
twisties.!
- I am thinking of coming home in order to increase my quality of life.
- What do you think I should do?
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C) Write your letter, using the plan you have created as a guide. Each dot point should
equate to roughly one paragraph. For example, this first paragraph is derived from the
first dot point listed above:
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Dear Aunty Janet,
Being on this strange planet has reminded me of the comforts you can only ever
really find at home. I’m talking about the faded green recliner uncle Joe insisted
on keeping, even though it had foam bursting out of the tears on the back. I’m
talking about feeling the water drizzle down your shoulders in a nice warm shower.
Most importantly, however, I’m talking about those crunchy orange spirals of deli-
cious goodness - I’m talking about twisties. Whenever I was down, they would pick
me up. Whenever I was sad, they would make me happy. They were always there
for me. They made my life so much better - and now they’re gone.
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Worksheet 2:
1. Imagine you are any one of the characters we have seen in the film thus far, write
a formal email to the head office of the space station. This can be about anything
you like - you could be proposing an adaptation to the avatars that will stop them
from farting, therefore increasing overall health and wellbeing for all staff mem-
bers on-site. !
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You should make sure to:!
- Write in a way that is easy to follow: one point should naturally flow into the
next.!
- Make sure your grammar and spelling is correct.!
- Write in a formal manner that is appropriate for communication in the work-
place: avoid colloquialism language you would only use with your friends such as
“onya mate, how ya goin’).
A) Describe your main point in 1 sentence, this will be the primary focus of your Email.!
eg. “Avatars should not be given the ability to fart, as the methane they
release has negative health impacts on all humans in the surrounding area”
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B) Using dot points, make a plan for how you are going to articulate this, for example:!
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- Methane gasses have negative health impacts on humans.
- When avatars fart, they release large amounts of methane gasses.!
- Therefore, Avatars should not be given the ability to fart.
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C) write your letter, using the plan you have created as a guide. Each dot point should
equate to roughly one paragraph. For example, this first paragraph is derived from the
first dot point listed above:
As you are aware, methane is incredibly detrimental to the human body. There
have been a vast amount of studies detailing the negative impacts it has on vital
organs such as the lungs, liver, and even the brain. The World Health Organisation
has clearly stated in their report “why farts are really bad” that humans should at-
tempt to reduce the amount of contact they have with this substance.
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Worksheet 3:!
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3. Design a poster to be displayed in the cafeteria of the station, it can be anything
you like: a poster designed to convince people to stop littering, trying to raise
morale, trying to get volunteers for a mission to a new part of the planet, the possi-
bilities are endless. You will be expected to explain why you have made the deci-
sions you made in regards to designing the poster. You won’t be marked on your de-
sign techniques as we have not studied this, you will be solely marked on how clear
and articulate your explanation is!
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B) Using dot points, make a plan for how you are going to articulate this, for example:!
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- The alien dog with a sad face is attempting to elicit sadness from the viewer.
- The capital “YOU” is designed to emphasise the fact that the responsibility falls on the
person viewing the poster. !
- These come together to cause the viewer to feel sadness, but also to realise that they
have the power to eliminate this sadness by changing their actions and putting their
rubbish in the bin.
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C) Write your explanation, using the plan you have created as a guide. Each dot point
should equate to roughly one paragraph. For example, this first paragraph is derived
from the first dot point listed above:
I chose to use a dog as the primary alien life form being affected by the rubbish as
it most closely resembles the most loved animal on Earth. Therefore, people are
more likely to empathise with it and avoid causing it unnecessary pain and suffer-
ing,
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Lesson 2:
EN4-4B - makes effective lan- 1. I will assess lels real life issues such
guage choices to creatively their learning by as the standing rock Communicate with a clear
shape meaning with accuracy, observing their pipeline, issues relating message that accurately
clarity and coherence demeanour and to culture such as peo- and coherently presents
level of contribu- ple climbing Uluru, and the information they are
EN4-5C - thinks imaginatively, tion during the unnecessary destruc- attempting to convey.
Outcomes 1, 2, 3, 4 & 5.
Cross Curriculum themes & General Explicit subject specific concepts and
capabilities skills
Cross curriculum:
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Sustainability:
Class and group discussions will involve
issues relating to the necessity of the
ecosystem for the survival of all species,
as well as the need for healthy econom-
ic systems that do not negatively impact
the environment. This will address OI.2
and OI.3 of the Australian curriculum’s
“key ideas” surrounding sustainability.
General capabilities:
How the quality teaching elements you have identified are achieved within the les-
son.
Teaching Indicators of presence in the lesson
element
1.6 Substantive communication will be the focus of the first half of the lesson.
This is when students will engage in a discussion with the entire class and the
teacher. After this, the students engage in group discussions, during this phase
I will walk around to each group and involve myself in the discussion.
2.1 It is made clear in both the group discussions and the writing task that I ex-
pect work to be of a certain quality, and what that work should consist of.
2.2 The class and group discussions are designed to prompt the students to come
to their own conclusions, and in order to do this they must engage in these
discussions. Discussions are also designed to be about topics that the student
will find interesting/engaging - the movie Avatar and a social justice issue
that has recently seen heavy news and social media coverage.
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Time Teaching and learning actions Organisation Cen-
tred
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Student:
Resources:
TV!
Avatar DVD
Student:
Resources:!
Computer hooked up to projec-
tor OR video on USB played on
TV.
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- What are the similarities and differences Student:
between Avatar and standing rock.
- Who do you think is in the right in each sce- Resources:
nario, or is it more complicated than that?
Resources:
55 Debrief: Teacher: T
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Today we not only thought of an idea, planned Student:
that idea and articulated that idea, but we
also thought critically about some ethical Resources:
problems that relate to the real world.
Collect worksheets
Reflection
What have I learned about the teaching and learning process when preparing this
lesson?
sure.
I will also judge how well they are understanding the
concepts and imaginatively expressing themselves by
paying attention to their contributions in class and
group discussions.
EN4-4B - makes effective lan- I will read their writing task and judge whether the
guage choices to creatively shape language used is appropriate for the context, and
meaning with accuracy, clarity
and coherence
whether or not it is clear and coherent.
EN4-5C - thinks imaginatively, I will read their writing task and judge whether they
creatively, interpretively and crit- have used critical thinking in order to respond to the
ically about information, ideas question.
Complete the table blow by inserting the AISTL graduate standards that you are
demonstrating and indicates the evidence from this lesson that should comply
with the standard.
1.5 The first two questions within the writing task require students to present a
coherent argument, referencing and contrasting the two texts. This means
students not only need to think of an idea, plan that idea, and execute that
idea, but must also critically engage with both texts as they talk about simi-
larities and differences between them. The third option, however, while
still building on prior knowledge only requires students to reference both
texts and are otherwise free to write about whatever they want. This allows
them to hone their focus on the newly added information (the implementa-
tion of both texts, and making links between them) as opposed to also hav-
ing to focus on making a convincing argument.
2.2 Content is organised in a way that allows students to have the best chance
of formulating an argument in the writing task and cementing the targeted
skill. Information is presented, it is discussed by both the teacher and other
students, and finally, students are required to synthesise this knowledge in
order to form an argument.
3.1 Achievable learning goals are set for students of all abilities, this is a simi-
lar explanation as in 1.5 above. More advanced students are required to
form an argument, and use evidence from both texts within that argument
to convince the reader of their point. Less competent students on the other
hand simply have to coherently write about a topic of their choosing while
involving references to both texts, making connections between them.
3.2 This lesson is scaffolding on top of the preceding lesson, adding slightly
more complexity to knowledge that has been taught previously.
3.3 The lesson involves both teacher (direct instruction) and student orientated
(constructivist) activities. Sometimes the teacher is speaking at the front,
and sometimes the students are conversing with each other.
4.2 Clear instructions and expectations are given prior to the commencement
of group discussions and the writing task.
WHS
What are the key risk issues that may appear for and need to be reduced/elimi-
nated in this lesson? Using your syllabus and support documents as well as other
WHS policy- Outline the key WHS considerations that are to be applied in this les-
son?
New South Wales Government. (2011). Work health and safety act 2011 no
10. Retrieved from:https://www.legislation.nsw.gov.au/#/view/act/
2011/10/part6
Resources Attached:
You must list all the resources that you have created or found in this space.
Worksheet 1:!
Compare the plot of Avatar with the issues surrounding Standing Rock in order
to do one of the following.
1. Imagine you are Jake Sully - you have been locked out of your Avatar body
and must write an email to head office convincing them that attacking the
Navi (native population) is unethical.!
It should be structured something like this:!
Hi (Name),
I have been made aware that you have disabled the access to my Avatar as a
result of my behaviour. Due to this, I must now resort to using words as op-
posed to physical force in order to convince you to stop this attack. I hope to
convince you that this attack should be stopped due to the fact that it is un-
ethical and cruel.!
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I believe it is unethical because (insert reason, this should be at least one
paragraph long).
(your name).!
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[do not copy this word for word, this is just an example]
2. Imagine you work in head office, you have received an email from Jake Sully
asserting that the treatment of the Navi is similar to the treatment of pro-
testers at Standing Rock. He uses this to argue that it is unethical and should
be stopped. Reply to his email stating why the treatment of the Navi is dif-
ferent to the treatment of protesters at standing rock.!
Hi Jake,
Thank you for your email, I have read it thoroughly and although I can em-
pathise with the points you make, your argument is not convincing as a
whole. !
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I disagree that the attack on the Navi is unethical because (insert point, this
should be at least one paragraph).!
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(your name).!
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[do not copy this word for word, this is just an example]
For example:
I chose to do (insert technique you used/thing you did) in order to (why did
you do that particular thing? What does it accomplish?)
Write about at least two seperate techniques/tactics you used to achieve your
goal.
A) Describe your main point in 1 sentence, this will be the primary focus of your
email/article.
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Sustainability:!
Through the discussion of the Stand-
ing Rock pipeline references will in-
herently be made to the negative im-
pact of oil spills on the environment.
This will stress the importance of
considering these impacts prior to
putting industry before environmental
concerns. As a result, Sustainability
outcomes OI.6, OI.7 and OI.8.
General capabilities:
- Literacy!
They are required to write coher-
ently.
- Critical and creative thinking!
Critical thinking is required to make
connections, while creativity is re-
quired to write about why they like
one text more than the other.
- Ethical understanding.!
The texts contain content which
will cause the students to judge
which party is “right” and which is
“wrong.”
- Intercultural understanding.!
The texts both consist of content
relating to differing cultural views.
How the quality teaching elements you have identified are achieved within
the lesson.
Teaching Indicators of presence in the lesson
element
2.1 For the group discussion and writing task, it is clearly stated exactly
what I expect to see in order to be considered successful.
2.2 The class requires high levels of engagement in order to make the class
and group discussions successful.
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Student:
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TV hooked up to internet and
computer
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Other considerations
Complete the table blow by inserting the AISTL graduate standards that you are
demonstrating and indicates the evidence from this lesson that should comply
with the standard.
1.5 The writing task contains two questions. One asks students to ex-
plain which text they like more and why, while the other asks
them to argue why one is more effective than the other. The first
requires the student to state their opinion, while the second re-
quires them to PERSUADE the reader, adding more layers on to
the task.
2.2 Information is provided through facilitated class discussions, stu-
dents then take this information to facilitated group discussions,
which aids in solidifying knowledge. Finally, students take the
knowledge they have gained from both activities and synthesise
it in order to compose a piece of writing.
3.1 Achievable goals are set for all ability levels, while particularly
challenging goals are set for those who are more capable. This
can be seen in the writing task, as described in 1.5 above.
3.3 Direct instruction (as part of class discussion when class has no
answers) and facilitated group discussion were both used in this
lesson, as was a student centred writing task. This provides both
introverted and extroverted students with a chance to learn in
their preferred way.
3.4 A range of resources were selected, these included ICT (videos)
and hard copy (writing task).
WHS
What are the key risk issues that may appear for and need to be reduced/elimi-
nated in this lesson? Using your syllabus and support documents as well as other
WHS policy- Outline the key WHS considerations that are to be applied in this les-
son?
- I must not engage in any discriminatory conduct.
- I must ensure walkways are clear to reduce risk of falling and/or injury.
- I will personally handle all tasks involving electric leads in order to min-
imise unnecessary risk to students.
New South Wales Government. (2011). Work health and safety act 2011 no
10. Retrieved from:https://www.legislation.nsw.gov.au/#/view/act/
2011/10/part6
Lesson, L. (2012, August 23). Luka Lesson - please resist me [video file]. Retrieved
from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-HED2UXwbw
Pushetonequa, Y. (2016, October 24). Standing Rock by Trevor Hall with footage
[video file]. Retrieved from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dyzzEnRR8f8
Resources Attached:
You must list all the resources that you have created or found in this space.!
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Standing Rock video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dyzzEnRR8f8!
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Luka Lesson video:!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-HED2UXwbw
Worksheet:
1. Write about which video was your favourite, and why. An example of what is
expected can be seen below:!
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“I preferred the video of the polar bear over the video of the penguin. The di-
rector of the polar bear video was much better at conveying the emotions being
felt by the animal, whereas the penguin video was difficult to connect with on
an emotional level.”!
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You should elaborate on this explanation and write at least a 1/2 page re-
sponse.!
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2. You work for a news agency and your employer has decided to publish the
video that you like the least. Write an email to them, persuading them to
publish the video you prefer instead. An example can be seen below:!
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“Dear John,!
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I noticed that you were planning on posting video X as opposed to video Y, and
wanted to share my opinion on this. I feel that video Y would be more appealing
to a larger audience than video X, this is due to the fact that it (insert positive
aspects), while video X (insert negative aspects).”!
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You should write at least a 1/2 page response.
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Part B: Rationale.
This rationale will explain how the lesson plans above achieve learning outcomes
while allowing for differentiated learning. It will then discuss the learning theories and con-
cepts that motivated the specific deign of both the individual lessons, and the sequencing of
In the first lesson, students discuss instances in which they would make use of plan-
ning to improve an argument in their day-to-day lives, and engage in a writing task at the end
of each lesson. This meets learning outcome EN4-1A as it requires them to explore the
discussions, and to “experiment with language forms and features to compose texts for en-
joyment” (Board of Studies, 2012, p. 123) during the writing tasks. Within these writing
tasks students are given the option to write for personal or professional reasons and are re-
quired to choose the most suitable language forms for their purpose. This means they must
shape meaning while evaluating how context and intended audience affect the writer’s
EN4-4B. During the second lesson, students engage in a group activity to discuss differences
and similarities between the two texts. This requires them to share their opinion while evalu-
ating the opinions of others, which is a requirement of learning outcome EN4-5C (Board of
Studies, 2012, p. 131). Within the third lesson students are set the task of comparing a Stand-
ing Rock video with a spoken poem in order to discuss how they are similar, how they are
different, and which one they prefer. This means they must “explain the similarities and dif-
ferences in meaning and language between texts created for different purposes or
audiences” (Board of Studies, 2012, p.133), therefore meeting outcome EN4-6C. These
comparative exercises also aid in building students’ confidence in the face of cultural and
ethical difference, which Kress (as cited in Stevens, 2012) asserts is something that should
result from effective pedagogy in the English classroom. Finally, through the analysis of the
Standing Rock video and spoken poem, students will need to identify the different ways in
which the texts express issues surrounding culture, ethnicity and social class, which is re-
Each lesson is differentiated to cater for multiple levels of student competency and
different types of student interests in order to maximise engagement and learning. This is
done for competency by offering multiple options in the writing task. Some allow for collo-
quial language while others require professional communication, some simply ask students
to state an opinion while others require them to make a persuasive argument. This can be
seen in the first lesson where option one asks students to write a letter home about anything
they like. The key learning outcomes will still be met, but it is not as challenging as the sec-
ond option which asks them to send a persuasive email to a colleague, which does not allow
for colloquial language and requires more professional communication. The third option is
directed at students who may not have interests involving a focus on writing. Instead, it asks
them to design a poster and then explain why they designed it the way they did. This is an
attempt to increase engagement, and therefore learning, by integrating student interests into
the lesson (Dunn et al., 2010). Similar themes can be seen across all three lessons. Templates
have also been provided for students that are struggling to grasp the concepts. This allows
them to clearly see what is expected of them and guides their writing (Dunn, Thies &
If students cannot see how subject matter connects to their day-to-day lives, they can
become uninterested, and as a result, unengaged (Douglass, 1979; Dunn et al., 2010). There-
fore, it is important to assist students in linking lessons to the real world. This is the goal of
the activity in the first lesson, where students are asked why it is important to plan arguments
prior to writing them down, and when they would use this skill in their lives. This allows
them to link the information from the lesson to their own life experiences, as constructivists
suggest this is how students learn most effectively (Clark, 2018b). This activity also provides
the opportunity for students to link their own personal interests to the lesson, which Dunn et
al., (2010) suggest is a good way of increasing engagement. All three lessons contain group
discussion tasks similar to this one. This draws from constructivism, which argues heavily
for activity-based, collaborative learning due to the fact that it allows students to make use of
their tools, as well as their classmates’ tools in order to construct knowledge (Keengwe &
Onchwari, 2011). Although these group tasks increase engagement, this does not always
necessarily equate to better results. Psycho-educational theory asserts that people will try to
the best of their ability to achieve what they believe to be their full potential (Chaplain and
Peterson, as cited in De Nobile, Lyons and Arthur-Kelly, 2017). This means that even if a
student is engaged, if they do not believe they can achieve difficult tasks, they may not even
attempt them. This is why the lesson plans include explicit quality criteria which state exact-
ly what they are expected to achieve. When students see teachers have high expectations of
them, it implies that the teacher believes they are capable of doing difficult tasks. This affects
the student’s self-image, work ethic, and as a result, the quality of their work (Hallinan &
Kubitschek, 1999).
based on theories surrounding constructivism and cognitivism. These two schools of thought
assert that learning is effective when the information being introduced is connected with in-
formation that has been learnt in the past (Clark, 2018b; Clark, 2018a). Constructivism
specifically advocates for the scaffolding of knowledge, arguing that new information should
be linked to concepts that have been learnt in the past (Sadker, Sadke & Zittleman, as cited
in Keengwe & Onchwari, 2008). This is exactly what is done in the three lessons attached
above. First, the concept of planning is covered, then that same concept is covered with the
added layer of comparative analysis, and finally, the third layer: the comparison of two cul-
In conclusion, the lesson plans above meet learning outcomes while allowing for dif-
ferentiated learning by drawing from the learning theories of constructivism and cognitivism."
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