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Topic:

Bullying as Hindrance in Reaching our Dream

Explanations used in this topic:

There are provided information and facts as evidence to explain this topic.

Introduction of this topic:

It gives a clear introduction by using statements of some important


knowledgeable person towards the topic.

Ideas got from the research:

“Bullying is insidious. It is not one great dramatic incident. It is a


gradual process of victimization where the child becomes more and more
isolated and afraid and the bully gets more and more aggressive,
strengthened through group support and lack of adult action.” By Susanne
Gervay

We should give more attention towards this issue because there are many
victims from the past years and most of them are students. The victim is not
the weaker one; A bully is always a coward.
Bullying as Hindrance in Reaching our Dream

In this modern generation we almost have everything we need. The


advancement and development are always at hand. We have the information that
we need but not all we have are for good. As it is written in the book of 1
Corinthians in the Bible, "Everything is permissible for me"--but
not everything is beneficial.”; Especially to the youth and young people,
their mind are open to adopt the things they see and the emotions that they
feel. We cannot deny the fact that even at the young age, a child may hurt
other child especially in school and we are all familiar in it. Bullying is
the use of force, or threat, to abuse, aggressively dominate or intimidate.
The behavior is often repeated and habitual. 

Susanne Gervay once said, “Bullying is insidious. It is not one great


dramatic incident. It is a gradual process of victimization where the child
becomes more and more isolated and afraid and the bully gets more and more
aggressive, strengthened through group support and lack of adult action.” She
is a specialist in child growth and development and author and was inspired
by a son's experience of school bullying, to write I Am Jack. Some victims of
bullying are person with disabilities and sometimes a discrimination between
rich and poor. They are not able to go outside their house because of fear
and traumatic experience and most of them stopped in going and transfer to
another school. Bullying may be physical, verbal or emotionally abusing
someone. There is an article from DepEd Nueva Ecija titled, “Pang-aapi
(Bullying)..Dapat Maiwasan”, wherein Vicencio, the author of the article give
some reason why does bullying are happening. Based on him, he observed that
most of the bullies are those who lacks in attention and love and whose
looking for affection in the family and they are those who needs to be
discipline by their parents. On the other hand at Balita.net, a student from
San Jose, Pili, Camarines Sur died because of physical bullying and it was
between 12 and 1 students. Based on a literature called “Bullying and
Harassment at Schools”, bullying and harassment are not an old issue and it
is said that it is a developmental stage that every youth has a possibility
to experience it.

Those are the facts and evidences that bullying are not good and has a
very bad effects for students. Both of the victim and the bullies must give
attention and love that they needs. For the victims, it may bring fear to you
and a very traumatic experience but please, don’t lose hope. Not all people
around you are bad person. You still deserve to live in freedom, free from
all the hurt and fear. There are still good people who are willing to help
you. Lastly, For all students out there, bullying are not good, Stop this
kind of barrier and issue and work hard to reach your goal. Be good to all
people around you and live with peace.

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