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HUMANITIES DEPARTMENT WRITING PROGRAM DIAGNOSTIC RUBRIC

Students Name: _____________________________ _____

Paper

Holistic Score: ____


Block:

Course: ____________________________________________

Topic: _______________________________________ Instructors: _________________________________________

6
CLEAR & CONSISTENT MASTERY
clear, insightful, arguable; germane to topic

5
REASONABLY CONSISTENT MASTERY
clear and arguable; germane to topic

4
ADEQUATE MASTERY

COMMENTS

Thesis

Thesis

FOCUS

may be implicit or explicit but still arguable; may be somewhat simplistic; generally germane to topic

Thesis

Subject, Purpose, Logic


strongly maintained

Subject, Purpose, Logic


clearly maintained

Subject, Purpose, Logic


generally maintained

Complexities of Topic
clear recognition of complexity

recognition of complexity with more than one topic addressed

Complexities of Topic

Complexities of Topic
some recognition of complexity thesis evident, but may be somewhat simplistic or implicit may merely restate introduction

comprehensive thesis and sophisticated strategy

Introduction

clear thesis and general introductory comments attempts to unify (more than just a restatement)

Introduction

Introduction

ORGANIZATI ON & STRUCTURE

unifies and synthesizes (may raise relevant questions, suggest applications, or invite exploration) purposeful; logical progression of ideas

Closing

Closing

Closing

Paragraphs

clear progression of ideas

Paragraphs

attempted organization of ideas

Paragraphs

very strong; achieved through syntactic sophistication and effective transitional devices

Coherence and Cohesion

strong; achieved through some variety in syntax and varied, effective transitions

Coherence and Cohesion

adequate; achieved through generally effective, if somewhat simplistic, transitions development of most with sufficient evidence; at least one point treated in some depth mixture of general and specific details; generally relevant, accurate, and appropriate; may contain minor content errors

Coherence and Cohesion

DEVELOPMEN T, SUPPORT, & ELABORATIO N

full development of all with extensive and judicious in-depth evidence grounded in relevant and appropriate texts; consistently specific, relevant, and accurate; precise and appropriate detail

Major Points

sustained, sequenced development with comprehensive and effective presentation of evidence grounded in relevant and appropriate texts; predominantly specific, relevant, and accurate; predominantly precise and appropriate detail

Major Points

Major Points

Evidence

Evidence

Evidence

Higher-level Thinking
consistent and insightful; sophisticated

Higher-level Thinking
consistent and insightful

Higher-level Thinking
consistent attempt

CRITICAL THINKING

sustained throughout; independent, synthetic, or integrative thought; connections made between and among disparate areas of learning varied, precise, appropriate meaningful variety; highly effective structure appropriate for purpose and audience

Logical Analysis

some independent or integrative thought, but may be somewhat uneven; efforts made to develop connections between and among disparate areas of learning

Logical Analysis

some independent thought but uneven; at least one attempt to develop connection between or among disparate areas of learning

Logical Analysis

Diction

varied and appropriate some variety; effective structure

Diction

generally appropriate some variety; generally effective structure generally appropriate but may be inconsistent; competent, if workmanlike, style

Diction

Sentence Variety

Sentence Variety

Sentence Variety

STYLE

Tone

appropriate for purpose and audience

Tone

Tone

Intellectual and Verbal Self-confidence


stylistic elegance or innovative, energetic presentation; effective creativity and compositional risk

Intellectual and Verbal Self-confidence


stylistic elegance partially achieved; creativity and compositional risk partially successful or sustained

Intellectual and Verbal Self-confidence


some evidence of stylistic control

few or no errors few or no errors

Grammar Spelling

few minor errors few minor errors

Grammar Spelling

some minor errors some minor errors

Grammar Spelling

MECHANICS

Punctuation
few or no errors

Punctuation
few minor errors

Punctuation
some minor errors

3 DEVELOPING MASTERY
may be implicit or explicit; descriptive rather than arguable; position not clear

2 LITTLE MASTERY
Thesis

1 VERY LITTLE OR NO MASTERY


no attempt to articulate a thesis

COMMENTS

Thesis

FOCUS

little, if any, attempt to articulate a thesis

Thesis

Subject, Purpose, Logic


vague attempt at a sustained argument

very limited treatment of topic fails to address topic beyond restatement of prompt or presence of unrelated topics may depend on reader inference to establish purpose

Subject, Purpose, Logic

Subject, Purpose, Logic


unfocused or unclear

Complexities of Topic
little recognition of complexity

Complexities of Topic

Complexities of Topic
no recognition of complexity

ORGANIZATIO N& STRUCTURE

may establish only general purpose with attempt at stating a thesis; or attempt at thesis may be evident later in essay may be direct restatement of introduction; may raise issues or questions unrelated to the topic minimal organization of ideas

Introduction

Introduction

few or no references to topic

Introduction

Closing

only passing or vague reference to topic disorganized progression of ideas

Closing

few or no references to topic

Closing

Paragraphs

Paragraphs

no organization of ideas

Paragraphs

somewhat logical but with serious gaps; weakened by simplistic, inappropriate, or intrusive transitions developed, but with vague generalizations general unsupported thought; trivial, irrelevant, or logically flawed; multiple content errors

Coherence and Cohesion

Coherence and Cohesion


illogical development

Coherence and Cohesion


incoherent development

Major Points

DEVELOPMEN T, SUPPORT, & ELABORATION

listed, but without support

Major Points

not given or developed

Major Points

Evidence

vague, redundant, irrelevant generalizations; serious content errors

Evidence

little or no specific evidence; serious and frequent content errors

Evidence

Higher-level Thinking
some attempt

Higher-level Thinking
little attempt

Higher-level Thinking
no attempt

CRITICAL THINKING

little, if any, independent thought; generally linear presentation of ideas; summary or paraphrase rather than analysis somewhat weak, imprecise, or inappropriate

Logical Analysis

little, if any, attempt at analysis

Logical Analysis

no evidence of attempt at analysis

Logical Analysis

Diction

very limited vocabulary or inappropriate word choices very limited variety; frequent problems in structure inappropriate for purpose and audience

Diction

severely limited vocabulary; poor word choices lack of variety; severe flaws in structure inappropriate for purpose and audience

Diction

STYLE

minimal attempt at variety; some problems in structure inappropriate for purpose and audience

Sentence Variety

Sentence Variety

Sentence Variety

Tone

Tone

Tone

Intellectual and Verbal Self-confidence


limited stylistic control

Intellectual and Verbal Self-confidence


minimal stylistic control frequent, serious errors frequent, serious errors frequent, serious errors

Intellectual and Verbal Self-confidence


lacks stylistic control

Grammar
frequent errors frequent errors

Grammar Spelling

pervasive, serious errors pervasive, serious errors pervasive, serious errors

Grammar Spelling

MECHANICS

Spelling

Punctuation
frequent errors

Punctuation

Punctuation

Final Comments:

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